Open Poetry #11 |
Persephone |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Persephone ~*~ first hint of spring mist is in dew as it is kissed in the break of light ~*~ whiff of scented breeze serenades Persephone trails along her skirt ~*~ shining sun sparkling dancing fairies on dust motes lyre strums golden dreams ~*~ she calls upon me Persephone, sing to me spring's sweet, soulful song ~*~ gilded lilies white trail pathways airy and bright velvet footpath light ~*~ Persephone loved through persimmon knew the truth spring births eternal ~*~ dedicated to Marsha 01.06.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
PERSEPHONE, Kari love, now you know why I call you Persephone, this is absolutely a sparkling and wonderful gem and it's going into my library right away. And I'm going to pin this up here, and let the lucky ones who drift around the halls see this. (Lucky because they are only visitors and can leave this infernal place!) < !signature-->Now I wonder what would be a link between Persephone and the phoenix, well I know but you know you like to work these out love. As you can see I'm arising, it's the thermals here. (It's a hospital kid, they keep it hot so the patients die from hypothermia when they get home!) Love this and you know I do Take care love Majestic Marsha And I'm smiling love I really am Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So glad you found it Marsha...enjoy and smile... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . I think that we may have to start having regular meetings of this group. . . if this is what we're going to see. . . wonderful. . . just wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love the legend of Persephone, the pomegrant seeds, and how resulted in the division of the seasons between Demeter and Hades....all of these haiku-senryus are beautiful...enjoyed muchly... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sis, this is glorious! I love the story of Persephone and that you should have written it for Mushy is an added bonus. Phoenix rising Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this was disappearing down the page and everyone should have the chance to see this one. Truly magnificent love Majestice Marsha Mmmmmmmmmmmm Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, A beautiful and wonderful write. You have a style all your own. *L* |
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