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Open Poetry #11

The Art of Being

Mattster
Junior Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 29

0 posted 2000-11-21 01:51 PM

The Art of Being

In time and space, a feeling grows.
The shifting nature of it all
Evokes a sense of rise and fall.
And though they rise and sink
And rise again,
A certain feel of want descends.

On the third stone from the sun,
While time stands still, a feelings grows.
A sense of being comes along,
And a closer look then gently shows
In rise and fall and fall and rise
The Art of Being lingers on.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-11-21 01:53 PM

This likes me.....this really likes me.....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

2 posted 2000-11-21 02:17 PM

oh I loved this so much.

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-11-21 02:36 PM

Now, this really had the depth to it. Made me think of a painting, and the many ways we view it.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen

Mattster
Junior Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 29

4 posted 2000-11-21 03:38 PM

Thanks, everybody, you are way too kind.

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