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I AM (responding to this challenge...hehe)
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I AM (responding to this challenge...hehe) |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State 
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As choppy as this may be.....this is who I AM. If I tried to "un-chop" it, then it just wouldn't have been Who I AM  I AM I am one who is giving, I am one who lives life full, I wonder how people in this world can be so down right cruel.~ I hear muted sorrow from the millions who agonize, I see hope floating in clouds and dancing in the skies.~ I want simply to be happy, to be loved and feel whole, I am one who is giving, I am one who lives life full.~ I pretend that I am tough and I wear an iron skin, I feel that iron melting when one really needs let in.~ I touch the breath of the wind, kissed by the sun, I worry about the day that I will lose a loved one.~ I cry for many reasons, when I do the tears roll, I am one who is giving, I am one who lives life full.~ I understand that “Living Life” is sheltered for some, I say take that chance, for tomorrow may never come.~ I dream of the many things I have yet to still do, I try not to let a day go by with out saying “I Love You”.~ I hope through out life I’ll give as much as I can, I am one who is giving, living life to it’s fullest, I am!~ < !signature--> ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
And a beautiful recipe you are  |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Rex, I couldn't wait any longer to respond to your reply. Thank you SO much for such a wonderful compliment! |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
You Are........Beautiful. And loved! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you are all these things my friend. . . a beautiful heart, kind, caring. . . and so much more. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Irie, it wasn't choppy at all, thanks for glimpse inside you it was lovely. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I dont see "choppy" ... I see sincerety ... I see Sheri ... and I like what I see very well met challenge... the view is lovely from here "I say take that chance, for tomorrow may never come.~ I dream of the many things I have yet to still do, I try not to let a day go by with out saying “I Love You”.~" later-"I am" a poet-gator jm Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Tepok Bopar Junior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 27 |
You are what you are, You are what you say. A very special person, Each and every day. Cheers, Tepok |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice..  i like who you are  and "i try not to let a day go by without saying 'i love you'" also.. good plan!hugs, g "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
A very good person indeed. i enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
 [This message has been edited by PanDol (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Mom.... Thank you! You must have taught me well!Sven, Thanks to you my friend. Kethry, You're welcome, and thank you! I'm glad you didn't think it was choppy! Janet, I am glad that you too didn't think it was choppy. I'm thrilled you like what you see. Thank you Tepok, Great little ditty, and many warm thanks to you! dgvarner, I'm happy to know you like who I am. It is a goo d plan isn't it? Richard, Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed! You have ALL given me such beautiful and wonderful comments! Warm hugs to you all, and thank you ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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aleisha Junior Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 10 |
You are in fact a wonderful person and I'am so happy you are my best friend ever!!!!!!!!!Love your best friend Sheri |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
No choppiness here sweetie...this is a fantastic piece, lovely to read your I Am ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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