Open Poetry #11 |
I Am Canadian..... (the I am Challenge) |
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I Am Canadian I am Canadian…. I have no doubt that that is me. I am North American…. I have a bigger family just south of me. I am of the Western world…. I also have some friends just east of me. I am life on Planet Earth….. I love that all of you are here with me. I am of the Milky Way….. I often hope that this is not the only place. I am just a single man….. I dream of Love in the stars I see. I am here and wait for thee… I know your out there seeking me I Am Canadian…. I have no doubt that that is me. James Parker Haley Jan 6, 2001 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you wear and share it well! Challenge met! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
whooohoooo....love this one...Canadian. oh my ...you make me smile love your style ((Hugs)) Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I'm Canadian too and like this muchly. You met the challenge superbly. Nicely done. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
i like the twist you put on this chalenge nicely done I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Parker--You are a sweet man with a lovely sense of humor who writes poetry sublime..and sees the beauty of a rose...(I think its time for the smile to loose the santa hat...how about you?) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ Nicely done, my Canadian friend. Welcome to my universal heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Parker! We got a bunch of your friends down here right now...would you send a bus for them...please??? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
James~ I love your answer to the challenge, so well penned and a wonderful read, well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful James ... from another happy fellow Canadian ... you've met the challenge well! Best wishes, /Kit |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey there canada i like the way you revised the challenge..made it your own still dreaming under the stars aye... (ROFL @ MARTIE about her santa hat...!!) hugs, g "sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....." -kathleen vibbert |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PARKER, I got a sweet smile upon reading your reply to challenge... And now to a fellow Canuk, I raise a chilled labatt blue RAH RAH your poem is cool!!! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
And here i thought it was gonna be like the beer commercial lol. I loved it.From a fellow Canadian Suzanne |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, I loved your creative expression of I am. Although your rhythm and metre made it way to close to a tune on Aussie television "I am you are, we are Australian" Now I'm gonna be singing it all day and night. Thanks! Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is like...totally awesome EH!! Being a fellow Canadian myself, I certainly have to agree with all of the above. I can almost picture you standing on the stage and performing this in commercial in between the Leaf games ( God help me!. This calls for Canadian Lager eh....and it's your buy too eh!! So Take off Eh!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunshine, thank you. Charisma, thank you. Poeminister, thanks canuck. raleighbttrfly, thank you. Martie, thank you sweet poet. Marge, oh so I have to share it with everybody else... Balladeer, I sent them down to keep you company and bring you real beer. tracie66, thank you. Kit, thanks canuck. dg, thanks sweets... I just forgot to read the rules.... CocoBaci, thanks canuck. Suzanne, thanks canuck. Kethry, we don't get your commercials up here, but it sure sounds like one of ours...these companies steal each other's Marina, you are at that, so take off eh! Parker |
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