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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-06 03:45 PM




velvet soft on cheek
warm breeze, delicate perfume
whispers in my ear

kiss by tiki torch
candlelit lanai at eight
sweet plumeria lei

mai tais and romance
bewitching moonlight and you
sultry looks of love


© 2001 Koko Stewart Koomoa
(All rights reserved)






Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-01-06 03:47 PM


Not fair.  I can't take a vacation right now and join you but this one sure makes me want to.  You painted a lovely image in just a few short words.  
Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2001-01-06 03:50 PM


Hi Koko......
Well, now......when is the next flight from Alaska to Waikiki?  Oh, I really can't tell you how good this one is and feels to one stuck up here in the frozen North!! Thank you for the tropical breezes.....it's wonderful!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



KokoStewartKoomoa
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3 posted 2001-01-06 03:57 PM


Awwwwww you both made my day. I am glad to share some sunshine of the heart!
I wish we could all get together for a Poets beach party Thanks so much!





Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Charisma
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lost in blue pages
4 posted 2001-01-06 04:16 PM


oh my.....do I read an invitation to come over to waikiki....sounds soooooooooo warm and wonderful....love it.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

Victoria
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5 posted 2001-01-06 04:42 PM


And beautiful nights they are.. enjoyed

              ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2001-01-06 09:28 PM


KoKo~
Lovely Senryu's.
You've painted such an inviting picture here.
~*Marge*~


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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii
7 posted 2001-01-06 11:36 PM


thank you all for your kind comments.
aloha

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2001-01-07 02:00 PM


Koko me and Michelle enjoyed the same view last weekend...we were drinking strawberry daquari's...it can be very romantic in Waikiki...James
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