Open Poetry #11 |
I Dreamed I Loved You |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
I Dreamed I Loved You By: Noah Eaton 1/2/01 I saw you standing on the sea shore Breathing the soothing sea breeze You turned as you saw my shadow, and then your spirits soared As you laughed with cheer, and reached for me Two peas in a pod, ripened in the sunlight of loves passion At last I hold you close to my heart A spontaneous combustion of ecstacy sparks in me, filled of affection I burst in tears, knowing I’ve finally found you, after searching so hard Oh love, never again will we yearn to find each other I am here for you, the wait is over You and I cheer in felicity together as we hold each other Devoted souls we are, finally together I feel your soft warm skin as I touch your neck You touch my face with your hand and drag your fingers down my lips We lean in together to kiss each other, under this romantic tropical sunset You lay me on the sand, I hold you close, kissing in the birth of loves wish I can feel your warm breath caressing at my neck, as I look into your eyes As I sigh knowing that we were complete together, at last We make love to each other as our hearts melt into one under passions skies Speaking words to each other, kissing each other, as we roll across the sand I wake up, sad to see it was just another dream Oh love, don’t worry, I will find you soon It’s just a matter of time, just a little longer, before we meet Just know that I’ve always loved you, and I will always love you I dreamed I loved you… |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I hold you close, kissing in the birth of loves wish very nice, Noah ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Oh love don't worry I will find you soon." Loved the title and every word...excellent writing...touching my heart...James |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Hey Soulbrother, Another smash hit poem from you and very beautiful. You really ignite my passions as you and me are both on the same boat here and waiting for destiny. Bilal |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
bautiful and passionate poem, I liked it very much, AP |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments, they all are so wonderful! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
how funny that i was just writing something very similar! ah..what wonderful poets we must be..LOL this is a great one..and such an awesome, catching title.. hugs, g ps..gotta love this line!: "A spontaneous combustion of ecstacy sparks in me..." "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown |
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