Open Poetry #11 |
I Could Wish |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I Could Wish I could wish for the stars and call to the breeze Or hope that the moon is made of cream cheese I could dream the world lived together in peace And wish so hard that wars would forever cease I could pray that love would sweep through me And that loves smiling face I will soon see These wishes and impossible dreams are as true As the chance that you will say again I love you I could ask the heavens to move out of the way Or tell the sun she mustn't rise up or set today I could choose a star and keep it within my heart Or command the ocean from the sands to be apart I could plead with an angel to give me her song And wish for truths touch to make me feel strong These hopes and yearning desires will come true After the world dies or that you say I love you I could beg the hands of time to sweep on back Or plead with the wind to alter her usual tack I could ask the grass not to sprout up and grow Or tell the moon not to reflect her silver glow I could ask for the secrets the mountains hold Or beg ice and snow not to make my heart go cold These thoughts and wants will all be my reality Immediately after you show me your hearts mystery Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
My sweet friend this is yet another great heart felt poem. Love and light, Richard |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I could wish that you keep writing poems like this. . . because these words make my heart sing. . . wonderful love. . . just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful words from a beautiful lady...hugs and love to you sweet friend |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard love, as always thank you, I don't deserve it but I thank you. Take care Mushy Sven love, you always say such sweet things and I don't deserve them I really don't and I will always write, because I'm learning ever learning, from the masters. Take care love as always Mushy Paula love, you are the beautiful one love, thinks will be better one day soon. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha~ and i wish i wasn't away so long but im back now this is fabulous my friend. a true heartfelt piece with so much of your love and wonderful heart wrapped up inside of it. beautiful! take care. ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy love, thank you so very very much, I've said you've been missed I mean it, you have. Take care always love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A wonderful, rhythmatic, and hearatfelt piece you have here! Nathan |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nate Dogg, thank you very very muchly. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy the read |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Vandana, thank you very very muchly Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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