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Agust P
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0 posted 2001-01-06 10:38 AM


TO YOU

young flower
sleeping in a white morning

fly to me butterfly
over the magical sea
with your colourful wings

I hear music
it was the hot wind
sending your voice
to me

© Copyright 2001 Agust P. - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2001-01-06 12:05 PM


Agust,
this was a very interesting write, very lovely.
write on
Keth.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Sven
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2 posted 2001-01-06 01:00 PM


I love the images in this one. . .perfect!!



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Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2001-01-06 01:07 PM


This is lovely and the first of yours I have read...welcome to our world
CocoBaci
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4 posted 2001-01-07 03:48 AM


Agust, me likes this...
A splendid write thank you for the enjoyable read
Coco

Irie
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Washington State
5 posted 2001-01-07 03:55 AM


So much you said in so few words.
Fantastic piece Agust  


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-01-07 08:55 AM


"hot wind"  love that ...

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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7 posted 2001-01-07 08:59 AM


My wish for you...that the butterfly you speak of lands softly on your heart and fills
you with the touch of love and peace...what
a beautiful weave~


Swim in the weave...don't examine it~

Agust P
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8 posted 2001-01-07 01:13 PM


Thanks to you Kethry and to you Sven and to you Paula Finn and to you CocoBaci and to you Irie and to you Irish Rose and to you Butterflies_dont_cry. Thanks again to all of you for your great comments!
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