Open Poetry #11 |
To you |
Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
TO YOU young flower sleeping in a white morning fly to me butterfly over the magical sea with your colourful wings I hear music it was the hot wind sending your voice to me |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Agust, this was a very interesting write, very lovely. write on Keth. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love the images in this one. . .perfect!! --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is lovely and the first of yours I have read...welcome to our world |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Agust, me likes this... A splendid write thank you for the enjoyable read Coco |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
So much you said in so few words. Fantastic piece Agust ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"hot wind" love that ... "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
My wish for you...that the butterfly you speak of lands softly on your heart and fills you with the touch of love and peace...what a beautiful weave~ Swim in the weave...don't examine it~ |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
Thanks to you Kethry and to you Sven and to you Paula Finn and to you CocoBaci and to you Irie and to you Irish Rose and to you Butterflies_dont_cry. Thanks again to all of you for your great comments! |
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