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Beware the Balladeer! (Public Information Notice)
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Beware the Balladeer! (Public Information Notice) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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Into the bright, unblinking light, I aright our Balladeer. His words of play, sent this way, Are, pray, too often read in here. He writes so young with silver tongue, (In some hopes of adoration) Of loving bliss and stolen kiss Amidst each woman's adulation. But neathe it all awaits his fall, He's called to sweetheart Frannie. He'll meet his maker, don't mistake her, He won't shake her with his planning. Til Fran's trap springs upon his wings, He'll sing to each Passions flower. His crafted words, like hummingbirds, Will gird their honey as his dower. Whilst honored men, with forlorn pen, Defend these lovely maidens. Balladeer, with Hamelin cheer, Draws nearer with his cadence. So please beware, you maidens fair, For 'Deer grazes in your glen. With Balladeer, it's crystal clear, He's near a devil amongst us men. heh heh - That oughta slow that wicked, wicked boy down a bit [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling with delight* oops, here we go again. Wonderful and a total delight to read. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LngJhnAg love, I hate to admit it but I really love this. (And since I adore 'Deer  it seems frightfully disloyal) this is really wonderfully written, and I have a great big smile. Which today of all days I could do with. Take care kid Mushy < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Writes so young? Balladeer?? Sailor, do you need your monacle replaced? That's his HAIR that's silver! LOL Great job, scalawag... nice to see they finally let you out... Next year, don't celebrate New Years QUITE so enthusiastically... 'kay? *G* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just my luck! The silver buck is tied to one who's true... 'deer in my glen??? I had a yen, to start a petting zoo! ROFL...couldn't resist!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somehow I surmise for those in glass houses shouldn't be surprised of scalawag mouses...meeces...mice! ROTFLMAO hummm.....wonder what the comeback will be.... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Alack, alas *pulling at my hair in grief* Why can't you ladies see that only I should be trusted to gather your honey? *oops* Star-Girl - Thank you very much for the love and hugs. Do you see that, Balladeer? Startime loves ME. Marsha - You havin' a bad day, Hon? C'mere, lemme give you a big hug *grope, hug, squeeze... oooo yeah*. I won't take adavantage of you like that devil Balladeer *more gropes and hugs* Belle - LMAO*silver hair - You have the finest, sharpest wit! I always enjoy your responses (except those over-the-top responses to that scalawag Toerag) Serenity - OMG@petting zoo! That is pure classic! I love it! Yanno, though, if I was in your zoo, I'd let you ride me - to heck with this lame petting stuff! lol Karilea - Glass houses? moi? Surely you recognize that the difference between Balladeer and me is that I am pure and innocent. Surely you see that? heh heh - I think she's falling for it, ol' Long John. Now, pour it on and she'll be all yours I am here to protect you and make you the most special person in the whole, wide, beautiful world. Hugs Easy, LJA, don't pour it on too thick or lil Sunshine might get suspicious. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
love your sense of humor but your timing is off. Didn't you read "The Flirt"? And don't you know the best defense is a good offense!  "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
if a sweet lass should ever fall for you it wouldn't be for the tall of you nor for the very all of you but more likely for the gall of you... for in your ever-maddening way you help the breeze with your sway... ROTFLMAO uh oh....methinks I've done it now... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Naw that'll never slow the boy down not one bit! You haven't been paying attention to life like you should be...THE LADIES LOVE A ROGUE!! |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
who are these people and you need to write more convincingly!!! ha ha good joke, enjoyed. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LJA, there's lots of special poems here but yours is something rare you use humor and not fear to show you really care but don't you worry don't you fret about you missing out some loving here, you yet may get fore Lorelei, gives you such a clout people love your humor, they also love your wit don't stress if they sometimes tell you, to go and 'sit on it!" we know that you're a charmer too it's just we are so frightened that you and Deer will have a blue (fight for the non Aussies) then how will our mood be lightened. Good one John That's telling 'im.Ps I'm very cross with you, you ask for action. I post an instant replay in 8 parts but did you read it Noooo! Some people are so hard to please.  Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
NOW NOW!! Stop picking on Balladeer!  Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
NOW NOW!! Stop picking on Balladeer! Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Dear John, what's really your problem my dear that you haven't the charm of Balladeer ah... you haven't his silver tongue I see and you're missing his magic and glee oh he gives you devilish inspiration now you would give us another imagination but honey you have failed right there cause I will defend Deer everywhere ah...that is what you were up too well ok..now I have seen your real you.  Charisma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And now it is my renewed luck, to see the doe herd 'bout the buck-- and the offer of a plank.. from pirate in a ship that SANK... (serenity exits, laughing just like Eddie Murphy....AUH HAW HAW...) with *winks* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You guys are just relentless... um.. ruthless... um... Luv ya both...  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL! I've missed your witty duels LongJhn .... this otta get one rolling all right! 10 paces at dawn? LOL  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LJA I'm sure Deer can himself defend but let me tell you (as a friend) although you plot and schmooze and grin this is one battle you can't win the ladies never, never will fall into your arms,no not at all as long as Balladeer lives and breathes your image rates as monkeys to trees with you as the monkey him as the oak so you needn't bother this quarrel to stoke you know you'll be whupped, so make amends now remember Deer still has, his flatulent cow if that poem was to turn and talk about you we'd have to stay her,e till with laughing turned blue Write on but not too TIC Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
aw, gee, I guess I'll have to flex a muscle and respond.....only takes one muscle to handle LongJohn... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderfully done!!! We are safe from the marauding 'deer with a sweet sailor here! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahem...........I do believe he has a head start on you my friend. ROFL..........so glad to have you back to pester the deer some. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I always know when I have that scalawag on the run - he starts acting nonchalant as he plots his riposte. Usually, he say some self-serving remark, and then he'll disappear for awhile. heh - He's as predictable as a woman! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Long John, How predictable is a woman? And how can YOU tell what a woman's going to do? Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
he's only a man...only a man btw...the writing is not so bad! ily truly deeply madly |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LJ, anyone ever tell you what a nut you are? LOL You got me laughing, (but not trusting) Good to see ya, hope you and Lorelei had a great Holiday!? <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Why, thank you all - every one of you for your support of my poetic talents. Now, you must be sure to tone it down or 'Deer will strain his only muscle - heh. |
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