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Rex Allen McCoy
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0 posted 2001-01-06 10:01 AM


A Simple Thought
~~~
I sent a thought to cyberspace
to see if it would grow
It vanished
lost
without a trace
A blink
and it was so
A simple thought from simple me
solicits no reply
The bitter truth
disturbs content
and stings
the strongest eye
~~~  

© Copyright 2001 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-06 10:05 AM


Hey Rex...it's great to see you around. This poem reads so well you can almost sing it. And Rex....no thought from you is simple  
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2 posted 2001-01-06 10:06 AM


Well not this time...I'm very happy to see you again! Hugs and welcome home!
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-01-06 11:17 AM


No Rex ... never simple indeed, this flowed beautifully, its always such a treat to read your words, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2001-01-06 01:20 PM


Rex~
No thought is simple - if you had it !

We often have no idea how that thought
touches someone thousands of miles away.

This is a little jewel.
Thank you for sharing it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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monique
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5 posted 2001-01-06 01:34 PM


Hey! Rex!
I am so glad i met you
Because of your simple invitation
I have found other people like you filled with love, joy, tears, and peace

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6 posted 2001-01-06 02:37 PM


Rex, sorry if I missed the first thought but thankfully I heard this one loud and clear
wonderful write,

There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong
inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode

WhtDove
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7 posted 2001-01-06 03:14 PM


It seems that way sometimes don't it? But ya know what? No thought of yours gets blinked away here!

Glad to see ya posting Rex, you've been missed!
WB  


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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


Rex Allen McCoy
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8 posted 2001-01-07 02:09 AM


Thanks everyone ... I guess I was just having one of them Kodak moments
and thankfully no one snapped a picture
It was nothing to do with Passions by the way

Kethry
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9 posted 2001-01-07 02:25 AM


Rex,
this poem has so many levels I can't believe it was penned by a "simple" thinker. Nope ain't nothing simple about this except it's beauty.
Write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Rex Allen McCoy
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10 posted 2001-01-07 11:53 AM


Kethry, thankyou
you are very kind
hope you're feeling better

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11 posted 2004-04-19 04:24 AM


yes...I understand
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