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Beverley
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since 2000-07-09
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England

0 posted 2001-01-06 08:39 AM


Your Dreams Died

Your dreams died
Because he lied
Now you've cried
And sorrows sighed
Your dreams died
They all died

Your heart aches
You made mistakes
His words were fakes
No dream dates
Your heart aches
Before it breaks

Your soul cries
No more highs
Just endless sighs
He's said good byes
Your soul cries
Then it dies


Beverley



© Copyright 2001 Beverley G M Searle - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2001-01-06 10:09 AM


...there..now dont you feel better for having sifted such sorrow....  

darned men...messin with good hearts...blast them all!..well..ok..not all..lets save us a couple..even if theyre a little bad...heehee!  

great little ditty bubbles..

hugs, g

"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



Marsha
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Maidstone Kent England
2 posted 2001-01-06 10:40 AM


Sssshhhh, they don't know me love. (Beverley only ever writes darkly love) And I wish she'd go into permanent retirement,
Thank you sweetie, much better
stilll ssssshhhhhh we'll let Beverley sleep I think

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-01-06 01:35 PM


Beverley~
Poor baby !
And those men can be scamps for sure !
Not sure if this is a dream or a nightmare ...
but in either case ... it's good to get it out.

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
4 posted 2001-01-06 02:07 PM


I loved the poem but let me say not all men are scamps. Women can be cold dishonest and adulterous also. Sigh we must find the right person one female and one maleto fall in love and treat eash with love and respect as it is ment to be.
Love and light,
Richard

Beverley
Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97
England
5 posted 2001-01-10 08:43 AM


Marge love, thank you actually it's Marsha
but I originally joined under the name Beverley. (Which is one of four of my names.) And I might add one that I particually detest. Only used in cases when I have to have gravitas, or when I am feeling very dark.
I will be fine. Even now I am rising
Take care love
                Mushy
Richard love, I know women can be just as heartless. I will be fine.
Now I think I'll let Beverley go back to sleep and concentrate on the future. Thank you very very much
Take care
                  Mushy


And while thy willing soul transpires
At every pore with instant fire

Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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