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Open Poetry #11

Love. Here & Gone.

JIGGZ
New Member

since 2001-01-06

Posts 1

0 posted 2001-01-06 07:04 AM

Someone very important in my life once asked me "Mike. What is love, Define it!". Honestly, I couldnt describe it but I knew whatever it was I shared it with my girlfriend Danielle.

My first love has come.
From the "baby's" to the "hun's",
She was the only one,
Who appreaciated Doctor Greenthumb.

We went from normal to the extremes,
Being with you, I now realize,
You were the girl of my dreams.

As reality strike upon me,
I now see, that you loved thee.

I ruined it much, I ruined it all,
When I was in need, who did I call,
From the basement hall,
To the retarted "where's my baseball!",
Why cant we take another walk,
In the neighbourhood mall.
But I bid farewell, to my love danielle.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-01-06 07:09 AM

Very sad losing the girl of your dreams and not the girl of her dreams....that old cliche .....you know the forest for the trees one.. good write I enjoyed it....welcome to Passions!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
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