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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-01-04 11:28 AM


I am combined of give and smiles
I wonder how I shall travel the miles
I hear your echoes in the night
I see in you vision’s delight
I want peacefulness to gift to you
I am combined of give and smiles

I pretend that you are here with me
I feel I set your imagination free
I touch your heart with dreams of me
I worry that you know not how much
I cry for your love to touch
I am combined of give and smiles

I understand all you say
I say that we shall have our day
I dream of a promise yet to be
I try to make this belief reality
I hope to make all your days worthwhile
I am combined of give and smiles


01.04.01


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2001-01-04 11:53 AM


Kari love, as always you've excelled at the challenge love. Utterly wonderful, but I'm just going to post another, so maybe I've learnt to.
Truly wonderful love it truly is.
Take care kid  
                   Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2001-01-04 12:00 PM


Well done and I believe this to be a true representation of yourself being a combination of give and smiles.... In other words, You are Sunshine.  Bob <><
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3 posted 2001-01-04 12:44 PM


and so much more. . . wonderful my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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4 posted 2001-01-04 01:37 PM


Marsha, I can't find your "other" one...some direction, please...and thanks!

Bob, I sincerely hope I have shed a little light on the I of me...thank you...

Thank you Sven...

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5 posted 2001-01-04 01:50 PM


and now I am smiling....thank you  
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6 posted 2001-01-04 01:53 PM


Karilea, "I am combined of give and smiles" and also a talent for poetry, continue to shine, challenge well met

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

doreen peri
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7 posted 2001-01-04 02:27 PM


lovely.... absolutely lovely....!!  
Kethry
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8 posted 2001-01-04 04:16 PM


Sis,
you did it, made the sunshine even brighter.
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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9 posted 2001-01-04 05:30 PM


JanetMarie....how could you NOT smile!? Life is much too good...

Brian, coming from you, I am humbled...thank you!...

doreen...well, better than some others, hey?...

Kethry, if YOU say so, then it must be true!  Thank you dear!...

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10 posted 2001-01-04 05:49 PM


I dream of a promise yet to be
I try to make this belief reality...
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Sunshine, you totally have captured the essence of your caring and loving heart...
Wonderfully expressed dear PoetFriend...
Hugs2u



Sunshine
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11 posted 2001-01-05 09:50 AM


Thank you Coco...introspection is sometimes not an easy thing to do...
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12 posted 2001-01-05 10:20 AM


Karilea~
And I see the light in the rays of you.
And I thank you for giving the smiles ...
as I wear one of fondness when I think of you.
Great big *Hugs* for this lovely write.
~*Marge*~



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Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2001-01-05 10:20 AM


Here is to your dance.......

Wonderful write my friend.

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14 posted 2001-01-06 01:31 AM


Lovely sunshiny girl   challenge well met
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



Wilfred Yeats
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15 posted 2001-01-06 12:49 PM


Beautiful image of you in these words - despite some heartbreak I seem to sense in some of them - I guess we all share some of that - I know God does not do 'dumb' - I keep my faith that all will be 'right' ultimately -
Poeminister
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16 posted 2001-01-06 02:15 PM


Sunshine -You've expressed yourself wonderfully.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

Parker
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17 posted 2001-01-06 04:58 PM


Sunshine, I agree, you are combine and give of smiles.... thank you for that sweet little smile of light.  

Parker.... oh, did I say I loved the poem.  

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18 posted 2001-01-06 05:03 PM


yes you are combined with give and smiles...love it...

((hugs))
Charisma

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