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I am .........for Serenity's Challenge
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I am .........for Serenity's Challenge |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I am combined of give and smiles I wonder how I shall travel the miles I hear your echoes in the night I see in you vision’s delight I want peacefulness to gift to you I am combined of give and smiles I pretend that you are here with me I feel I set your imagination free I touch your heart with dreams of me I worry that you know not how much I cry for your love to touch I am combined of give and smiles I understand all you say I say that we shall have our day I dream of a promise yet to be I try to make this belief reality I hope to make all your days worthwhile I am combined of give and smiles 01.04.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, as always you've excelled at the challenge love. Utterly wonderful, but I'm just going to post another, so maybe I've learnt to. Truly wonderful love it truly is. Take care kid  Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Well done and I believe this to be a true representation of yourself being a combination of give and smiles.... In other words, You are Sunshine. Bob <>< |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and so much more. . . wonderful my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, I can't find your "other" one...some direction, please...and thanks! Bob, I sincerely hope I have shed a little light on the I of me...thank you... Thank you Sven... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and now I am smiling....thank you |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, "I am combined of give and smiles" and also a talent for poetry, continue to shine, challenge well met It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely.... absolutely lovely....!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sis, you did it, made the sunshine even brighter. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JanetMarie....how could you NOT smile!? Life is much too good... Brian, coming from you, I am humbled...thank you!... doreen...well, better than some others, hey?... Kethry, if YOU say so, then it must be true! Thank you dear!... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I dream of a promise yet to be I try to make this belief reality... ========================================== Sunshine, you totally have captured the essence of your caring and loving heart... Wonderfully expressed dear PoetFriend... Hugs2u |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Coco...introspection is sometimes not an easy thing to do... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ And I see the light in the rays of you. And I thank you for giving the smiles ... as I wear one of fondness when I think of you. Great big *Hugs* for this lovely write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Here is to your dance....... Wonderful write my friend. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lovely sunshiny girl challenge well metTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Beautiful image of you in these words - despite some heartbreak I seem to sense in some of them - I guess we all share some of that - I know God does not do 'dumb' - I keep my faith that all will be 'right' ultimately - |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine -You've expressed yourself wonderfully. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunshine, I agree, you are combine and give of smiles.... thank you for that sweet little smile of light. Parker.... oh, did I say I loved the poem. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes you are combined with give and smiles...love it... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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