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Why Wont They
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I spend all my love Mending broken hearted wings No one flies for me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
warm breeze fluttering winter gone in winged flight Paula where were you We missed ya. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ This is just a small piece of who you are. And a wonderful piece at that. In your thoughtful tenderness of others, you do indeed mend ... Some of us are meant to wind the propellers of others and watch with great joy as they take flight. Spread your wings, honey. They will lift you with sighs of love, breathed from the very hearts you helped to mend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You have the heart of an angel and therefore you will find someone while you yourself are in flight. That wonderful flight to give brings happiness eventually.....love to you ethome |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know what you mean..and they don't seem to appreciate it...someday, someone else will mend someone's wings just for you...it does come around...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, what can I say this is as always beautiful, and that I know what you are going through love. Oh don't I just, still I shall lift each foot up and put it down and keep moving forward. We will be fine and sooner rather than late Take care Mushy  |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
i too have spent many a day reaching out to broken hearts. When we ourselves have a broken heart you fel for other that suffer. One day will be our day to love and soar. Love and light, Richard |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
few words saying so much, I loved this poem AP |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
when spending your love isn't enough anymore cry on my shoulder when wings are broken and cloud nine is out of reach friends comforting you ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
This is so beautiful Stone walls do not a prison make Nor iron bars a cage Minds innocent and quiet take That for a hermitage If I have freedom in my love And in my s |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*APPLAUDING*....PAula, this is just wonderful. Please tell me you'll send this out to one of the many journals craving Haiku these days...beautiful piece of work  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Serenity...moving girlie moving...but I am finished now and can take my time unpacking and settling in...so the pressure is off...thank you for your poetic reply its much appreciated Marge...you cannot know how your words touched my heart...thank you so very much ethome...yes except I'm not sure I know how to fly anymore...I feel like I have been grounded one to many times ya know? Come teach me sweet poet man James...so I have been told...but it feels a long time coming ya know? Thanks my friend Marsha...sooner can come any day now darlin...one step at a time I know...and I am sort of Richard...like the song says...our day will come...thank you Agust...thank you for reading and again welcome to Passions Charisma...I always count on your warm hugs...thank you Beverly...thank you I appreciate that you took the time to read this hoot_owl_rn...thank you...and maybe if I knew where to submit I might...I have never submitted anything to be published before... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I love these kaiku's...one little verse says so much... Nicely done... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
the wounded healer... if no one can fly with you, smile. teach them to soar. if an angel flies to close to the ground they crash. so share the wings m'dame! you've got a big enough halo to spare. "...a gross, physical salute to the fantastic possiblilties of life...-but only for those with true grit. We're chock full of that." *snoogins* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula wind to your wings Paula I know it's hard to fly When all want you to be taller to protect and touch the sky. but your wing has covered many a foundering soul rest till youare recovered and you feel more whole rest beneath my damaged wing for I've been battered too and your cover helped me sing helped me make my soul anew When you're ready we shall sing I'll watch you, say wind to your wing Keth. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
where were they she asks dealing with a lovely task all wind 'neath your wings [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Why Won't They....It's time to fly for you Paula...not an easy thing to do but once you find the strength to lift off let the wind be your guide. Truly heart touching weave dear poet~ Swim in the weave...don't examine it~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Breathe...thank you Ethan...such a sweet thought thank you Keth...for your poetic reply I thank you...for your friendship thanks just arent enough Sunshine...the beauty of you gift is immeasurable...thank you Holly...I think I have forgotten how to fly...thank you |
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