Open Poetry #11 |
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I Am......serenity's challenge |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia ![]() |
~IAm~ I am a free spirited soul I wonder where my spirit comes from I hear angel wings caressing I see them floating along I want to fly with them, high above the clouds I am a free spirited soul ~~~ I pretend I've started on my journey I feel myself begin to float I touch the air caressing it I worry I will not cope I cry for those who lose their way I am a free spirited soul ~~~ I understand that we can lose our way I say, "live one day at a time" I dream that my spirit free's me I try not to hold onto yesterday I hope the gentle angels guide me I am a free spirited soul ~~~ I'm sorry I know this is not fantastic but I wanted to attempt the challenge...thanks for reading ~HUGS~ ~Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You met the challenge beautifully. Very well done. Poeminister |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Tracie!! It's just great and I've read quite a bit of your work and I think it describes you well! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what do you mean this isnt fantastic... its YOU .. you sincerely captured the Tracie we see and adore in your poetry... so yes it is fantastic!! later-angel-girlie-gator ![]() jm ![]() Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
P~ Thank you very much, appreciate you reading Thanks Tracie~ Ethome~ WOW!!! thanks so much for that, your words have made me smile...see ![]() ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Oh Janny girl you know how to make me feel good....thanks hon, I truly think this is not so great but you make me feel good about it with lovely comments like that...thanks That graphic is truly devine Thanks ![]() ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tracie, I think this is fab...how could we not love it? It's YOU!!! back to the top now...and take a bow lady...HUGS to you. And the format was done perfectly too. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my..you sound wonderful free.... love it...free spirit soul |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I really liked this poem. I can relate to your words. Good writing. Love and light, Richard |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie love, what do you mean not fantastic, it's sensational, it's manifique, formadable, c'est tres tres bon! Mais qui mademoiselle, c'est tres bien. It is as always love a beautiful piece from you, utterly wonderful and I love it. It is Tracie Take care kid Mushy ![]() MM Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie, this is the best the very, best and it is you to a "t". Very, very well done! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ ![]() Your spirit soars freely across the miles Sharing ~Winged Hugs~ and giving lots of smiles I know I have received my share of the wonderful smiles that your ~Angel Heart~ wears LOVE YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
tracie, you are a free spirited soul and it shows so much in your poetry. This piece is great for any challenge. ![]() Parker |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tracie, I'd say not only did you meet the challenge but you did so with your usual style and wonderful grace. this was beautiful my friend and full so much of YOU ![]() take care ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
this is my favorit answer to this chalenge i hav found so far. i thought it was FAB! I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is definietly you my friend. . . and it's wonderful. . . just like you. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
TRACIE, I'm elated you did the challenge I was dying of curiousity to peak at your response... And now I have read I'm honored to make your acquaintance... You're such a sweet PoetFriend with a heart of gold (to coin a phrase from someplace...) Hugs2UalwaysMyFriend |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I already knew you were fantastic ... it's been evident since I first came to Passions and the poem is wonderful too ![]() |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Tracie....why are you sorry? This is beautiful. You are what you are, yes? And that makes it even more beautiful. I enjoyed it and thought it was great! ![]() ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I am feeling very lazy and I was going to do a group thank-you but I just can't here goes: Seren~ You sweet gal...thanks honey bun for those lovely comments, I appreciate YOU very much ~HUG~ Tracie~ Charis~ Sweetie you know what it's like free one minute not the next, this is how my poetry makes me feel, it's where I love to escape to, my free spirited soul. ~HUG~ Tracie~ Richard~ I'm glad you can relate and that you liked it..thanks for your comments ~HUG~ Tracie~ Hey my sweet mushy friend, you are so appreciated and don't you forget it...thanks for stopping by with those most delightful words ~HUG~ Tracie~ Hey Keth, wonderful reply hon I appreciate them and you always ~HUG~ Tracie~ Margie~ my adorable friend, I guarantee you will recieve many more hon Your spirit soars freely across the miles Sharing ~Winged Hugs~ and giving lots of smiles I know I have received my share of the wonderful smiles that your ~Angel Heart~ wears this is so beautiful and I thank you so much, you always brighten my day Margie girl ~HUG~ Tracie~ James~ Thanks so much for that reply, know that it is appreciated ~HUG~ Tracie~ Little Aimster how much those words mean to me from you...thanks hon very much ~HUG~ Tracie~ raleighbttrfly~ WOW!!! thanks alot, I'm glad you liked it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Sven~ Thanks so much my friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Awww Coco I'm glad you liked what you read, dying out of curiosity hey...well I'm glad I didn't disappoint...thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ Rex~ I feel the same, you have always been my friend from my very first appearance in passions and I both appreciate and admire you my friend...thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ Irie~ This is a lovely reply...thanks very much for that, appreciate it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Thanks to all of you, I love being a part of passions and knowing all of you, every one of you are the most finest poets ![]() ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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