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ranita311
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since 2001-01-04
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0 posted 2001-01-06 01:32 AM


          
             MORE THEN A FRIEND

     I crossed the line with my friend.
No turning back now. Where will it end?

     What am I doing? Have I lost my mind?
How could I do this and get myself in such a bind.

     He belongs to someone else, cant you see..
your going to cause yourself alot of pain and
misery. I know this is true, i knew it from the
start. But sometimes you dont think about it.
You just follow your heart.

     It's been six months since our first kiss.
I'll never forget that moment of sweet heavenly
bliss. I love him deeply.. truly I do.
Whats going to happen? I haven't got a clue.

     I let myself get in too deep,
knowing this man wasn't mine to keep.
i let down my guard, and opened my heart, hoping
and praying we'd never have to part.

   When he's not with me
my mind starts to wander you see...
  
   Is he there holding her with his gentle touch?
Is she receiving his sweet soft kisses i love
so much?

   The thought of them together
is driving me insane.
when i see the two of them....
it's pure heartache and pain.

   As much as I love him and as great as he is..
I have decided I can't be the other woman any more.
WILL I LOOSE THE SPECIAL FRIENDSHIP THAT I LOVE
AND ADORE ??......

                           RANITA311

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-01-06 04:53 AM


I felt your pain in this and I enjoyed reading it... but my dear if you're the second one in then it's time to move on and find some of those soft kisses that are for your lips only....ethome
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-01-06 04:57 AM


Complications...someone or everyone can be the loser in this one...James
cobie
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since 2000-11-28
Posts 4
netherlands
3 posted 2001-01-06 03:42 PM


Oh how this hurts.........really, you and I, both in the same position, knowing whe have to make this decision, for our own sanity, but how it hearts......
I do admire your poem, and I hope you'll find the strength to cope

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2001-01-06 05:32 PM


This is a VERY hard situation for
all involved. I don't have any wise
words to give you, but the only thing
I can say is do what you feel is right
in your heart. If you do that, I truly
feel that one can't go wrong. And above
all be true to who you are and what you
believe in!

Take care,
~amy~

~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~


Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-01-06 05:35 PM


oh boy, oh boy wish they had a column and I was Dear Abby cause I sure could go on about this one, but keep writing.......

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


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6 posted 2001-01-06 05:37 PM


this is sad....and you have done a good decision, don't be the second choice than you would be hurt everytime more and more...and you are to good to be second.

wish you a lot of strength.

((warm Hugs))
Charisma

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