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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-01-04 06:43 PM




Living Water

Mirror of future
with reflections from the past
manifestation
of shelters in depth of lake
liquor of living water

Charisma

© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
Stan
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1 posted 2001-01-04 07:36 PM


Charismatic!  Life as we know it could not exist without water.  You have captured a dimension of that miracle.


Daniel J D
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2 posted 2001-01-04 08:23 PM


Charisma,
You do know where to hit me. Hugs.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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3 posted 2001-01-04 08:30 PM


Charisma~
This is simply beautiful.
A lovely reflection of your talent.
~*Marge*~



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4 posted 2001-01-05 11:55 AM


Stan: thank you for your reply...water is the beginning of every life.

Daniel: have I hit you    ....hope that you liked itthan... my friend.

Marge: thank you for your lovely comment, love to have them always.


KokoStewartKoomoa
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5 posted 2001-01-05 07:18 PM


awesome write..with deeper meaning than the surface...a very fine tanka Bravo! aloha!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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6 posted 2001-01-06 05:39 PM


KoKo: yes that's what I mostly try to do...thank you for stopping here my friend.


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