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Living Water......Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Living Water Mirror of future with reflections from the past manifestation of shelters in depth of lake liquor of living water Charisma |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Charismatic! Life as we know it could not exist without water. You have captured a dimension of that miracle. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, You do know where to hit me. Hugs. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ This is simply beautiful. A lovely reflection of your talent. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Stan: thank you for your reply...water is the beginning of every life. Daniel: have I hit you  ....hope that you liked itthan... my friend.Marge: thank you for your lovely comment, love to have them always. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
awesome write..with deeper meaning than the surface...a very fine tanka Bravo! aloha! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
KoKo: yes that's what I mostly try to do...thank you for stopping here my friend. |
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