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Open Poetry #11

haiku 104

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2001-01-05 07:54 PM

two friends watch the moon
slip behind silvery clouds,
turn to kiss hello.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-01-05 07:56 PM

Wonderful Beki...sweet...and lovely...

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-01-05 08:02 PM

Lovely haiku...nicely done.

Poeminister

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2001-01-05 08:23 PM

yup, its always nice to share, isnt it?

loved this tender moment

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

4 posted 2001-01-06 12:48 PM

thank you all, glad you enjoyed

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2001-01-06 01:37 AM

Nice double image, focus and background.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

6 posted 2001-01-06 07:01 AM

thanks crawdad!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2001-01-06 07:05 AM

Well done! Beki

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

8 posted 2001-01-06 08:05 AM

Oh this is sooo cute Beki...well done
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-01-06 08:41 AM

wonderful imagery...love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

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