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Beki
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0 posted 2001-01-05 07:54 PM



two friends watch the moon
slip behind silvery clouds,
turn to kiss hello.

© Copyright 2001 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-05 07:56 PM


Wonderful Beki...sweet...and lovely...

Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-01-05 08:02 PM


Lovely haiku...nicely done.

Poeminister

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3 posted 2001-01-05 08:23 PM


yup, its always nice to share, isnt it?

loved this tender moment

Beki
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4 posted 2001-01-06 12:48 PM


thank you all, glad you enjoyed  
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5 posted 2001-01-06 01:37 AM


Nice double image, focus and background.  
Beki
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6 posted 2001-01-06 07:01 AM


thanks crawdad!
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7 posted 2001-01-06 07:05 AM


Well done! Beki
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8 posted 2001-01-06 08:05 AM


Oh this is sooo cute Beki...well done
Tracie~


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9 posted 2001-01-06 08:41 AM


wonderful imagery...love it.

((hugs))
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