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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Magma My thoughts are magma floating Coating a cores foreboding Warning me the fire within For the magma is but skin. Volcanic awe burns inside Rages gore that wont abide. Spills the mountain glowing red To the bottom where it bed. And there forms an island shoal New acreage for my goal. For future tide to suture pride My soul to find a future bride. I'll build new with dreams as seeds Care for them and tend their needs Sing to them in gentle cry Singing soft my lullaby. I'll raise an alter fire free An alter just to worship thee. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A young man's fervent desires.... thereby stand you in glory's fire.... never old only great! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* your fire of seach burns in the beautiful words you pen. Wonderful. What lady could resist such a romantic poet as you. Thank you so much for sharing this with me. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Coating a cores foreboding"... "For future tide to suture pride"... "I'll build new with dreams as seeds Care for them and tend their needs" Sy--Good day. I love the phrases in this piece. As always, wonderful writing.... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My thoughts are magma floating Coating a cores foreboding Warning me the fire within For the magma is but skin. Volcanic awe burns inside Rages gore that wont abide. ==================== And there forms an island shoal New acreage for my goal. For future tide to suture pride My soul to find a future bride. I'll build new with dreams as seeds =================== I'll raise an alter fire free An alter just to worship thee. ======================== ooh me loves a man with that fire down below  way cool Stinky...from purgatory to paradise all in one poem ... and alters to worship ... OH YEAH very cool Sy-guy... you can blow your top anytime *winkiewinkie* me  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I really enjoyed your mind-set in this. You are so good at what you do. Keep doing it, okay ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes... an eruption... and brand new start after cooling off... Superb, my guy Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, A great comment, thank you.*L* Startime, Thank you for the like and hugs. Poeminister, Thank you for the read and praise. JM, I can blow your top anytime? Listen for the rumble. Winkiewinkie, stinky Marge, You are a treasure and a pleasure. *L* Nan, Thank you my Nan gal *L* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done Seymour, really liked the images in this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jwesley, Thank you for stopping by, glad you enjoyed. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
And there forms an island shoal New acreage for my goal. For future tide to suture pride My soul to find a future bride. YOu always burn brightly, with your beautiful words. wonderful poem. There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brian, Thank you for the beautiful words. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful....wonderful penned. its always a pleasure to read your work. excellent as always ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Once again I thank you for the wonderful comment. I thank you for taking time to read my work. Sy |
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