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Passions Hold
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Passions Hold... Gently they're drifting in feather like softness, In grayness of morning, the sunshine in fade. Touching the beauty with eyes, as I view same Wondering in distance, if your eyes invade... My thoughts that are tender, the memories that cover Cloaking the tree limbs, so bare, holding tight. Waiting the quilting, of warmth from the whiteness As I sit here dreaming, with you in mind sight... Gliding and sliding, thoughts keep on slipping Wishes "till next time" are heartened with care. Dancing, ballet like, the flakes hold attention As I, in my dream state, am wanting me there... You are, as I am, ingrained in my heartbeats Pulsing in rhythm, each breath that I speak. If only you felt what each moment of living Expels from my sighing, from words that bespeak... Desires that melt me, as snow with its coolness Upon which my skin with it's warmth, soaks, imbues. Oh how you cloak me in thoughts of you daily, Comforted quilting, I'm pieced and infused... Inspired, yes always, by poetry in motion, The dance of the snowflakes, their touches that peak. Collecting upon me, the piling of wonders This morning is made up of passions, unique... ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Quiet One Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 46Shhhhh |
Nice thoughts, with a good flow I enjoyed this |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you neighbor...  ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Hello Wynter, I like this very much. You have an easy style that is fluent with many nice twists of words to make it different and poetic. Thanks, Stan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love it also and I meant to tell you that you have a lovely name. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I loved the read. As always you write so well friend. Love and light, Richard |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Stan...thank you for your comments..I have lived in the PA Dutch area in a small town for almost 25 years now..the natives tend to speak in reverse phrases at times..and darn if I haven't picked that up... Kathleen, I knew you would..being another romantic..  and the snow was so lovely this morning...until I had to shovel it twice...Richard...as always you are so very generous in your comments to me huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Wynter, My, my, you have certainly out done yourself with this writing. Goodness, I felt every line, flowing like a soft breeze in the night, and leaves swimming on their branches in the moonlight. Geez, see what this writing did? My best to you. BC |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beautiful piece, excellent flow.....nice read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Passionate, soft, enjoyed muchly...wonderful writing as always... Poeminister |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love how you write so smoothly flowing like breezes turning pages in the poet's mind..idea after idea full of open warm inviting reading...you're just a lovely gentle dove of the poet world...you sure you ain't the queen? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
BC- your responses DO touch me, deeply...huggzz and thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Tracie~ pleased that you enjoyed Poeminister- I enjoy when you read and feel what I am expressing, thank you ...always appreciate your visits E- I once was told I was my father's princess (although I never knew it )but never a queen...and open, warm inviting responses tend to make me pen my words in kind. *and this is so sweet- "a lovely gentle dove of the poet world" no one has ever said any such thing to me before...(don't tell anyone, but it brought a tear or two to my eyes this morning) thank you, E huggzz... ~Wynter/Moonchild "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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