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I am.....(Serenity's Challenge)
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I am.....(Serenity's Challenge) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I am I am me, Canadian, and proud to be, I wonder about my destiny I hear serenity's enchantful song I see the moonlit river gliding I want only to sing too-to sing along I am me, Canadian, and proud to be I pretend my feet know how to walk on the ball I feel the sky and sea pulling at my soul I touch my forhead when sighing a prayer I worry, uncertain if I'm getting anywhere I cry sometimes, then will have a deja vu ephipheny I am me, Canadian, and proud to be I understand we our own fates sow I say don't wait 'til tommorow I dream of being a dolphin in the ocean I try to have a good sense of direction I hope just to find tranquility I am me, Canadian, and proud to be Poeminister |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done..I would love to have that nice sense of direction...  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely, do you live near the sea? Seems to be a recurring theme here... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!BRAVO!!!My fellow Canadian, how perfectly wonderful is this poem. Oh, can I ever connect with you on this one. Though I love my mountain home with all its magic still my heart belongs to the ocean. *sigh* delightful. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
challenge well met, my dear friend...this is wistfully peaceful....there is spiritual longing evident in this wonderful write. It reminded me of one of my goofier jokes: Q. What did the Zen Buddhist say to the hot dog vendor? A. Make me one with everything. Grins, winks, hugs to you!!!! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! You stayed with the outline and wrote so succinctly, simply and well! You have great focus. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful done for a Canadian....  love it....and yeah I can hear you singing. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I am Canadian too and I think this is a marvelous series of expressions right from the wide open heart of a Canadian....Us(Canucks)love the rest of the world so much from pole to pole with an appreciation of what it means to be free. This is well spoken from a true Canadian! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i believe VAS has said what i wish to say...i like the way you reveal so much of yourself using such short sentences..it kind of makes this a cozy heartwarming read... glad to know you |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Poeminister, I liked the way this piece ran, smooth. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 I found great humor in your poem... Especially, "a deja vu ephipheny." I have no idea what this means, but it Did make me laugh. I suppose it's ok to laugh in Canada? Very good imagery... like touching your head while sighing in prayer! (Ha) I know us dang Yanks are All crazy.... Love ya anyway, Bob <>< |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Just wanted to say thanx to all of you, for your kind and uplifting comments... Poeminister |
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