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Sweet Sweet Secret
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Sweet Sweet Secret |
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Sunshine
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Sweet Sweet Secret she has a sweet sweet secret known only to she except for one friend she whispers to, and they believe she has a little secret known since she was three… she saw the gift of magic when her mom kissed her dad, you see… she has a sweet sweet secret known between her and him first love of her heart and she believes the love of Jim she has a little secret known since she was just thirteen she saw the gift of magic in giving of a friendship ring she has a sweet sweet secret known between her and he first real love of her heart and the wedded bliss she'd see she has a little secret known as a young woman's dream she saw the gift of magic as the Lord blessed the holy scene she has a sweet sweet secret known under the heart of her first real gift of her heart a true love to be sure she has a little secret only that a woman can know she saw the gift of magic in the birth of a child, and lo she learned of a sad, sad secret and learned of unfaithfulness she saw the gift of magic gone and with it her marriage no less… time and time and time again she wanted to live a dream to have a "for-sure" secret a love that she could never forget but time took life by the hand and magic seemed far away she trodded, plodded on demand but still magic's song held sway soon alone, one day she smiled for after all, life was still worthwhile then all at once, as if by God's hand or by some piece of magic on command she has a sweet sweet secret known only to her eyes some one wrote the words she sought and caught her by surprise she has a little secret known only to a woman in love she saw the gift of magic in the eyes of the man she loves she has a little secret and she keeps it to herself and through the gift of magic his poetry graces her shelf dedicated to those who find a poet to read, and treasures all words therein written 01.04.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Denise
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This is beautiful, Karilea!! Very beautiful!! Denise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I love the road I was led down with this poem to the conclusion. I have a sweet secret, too. I LOVE your poetry!!! SHHH!! (don't tell anyone  ) |
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Sunshine
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Denise...thank you for the very... 'Deer...ok, I won't....and now I'm gone for the night... everyone else...please enjoy! K |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sometimes, in your wonderful poetry, your secret is revealed!!! I love this one.  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you've penned the transitions - from faith in young love thru disillusion, to faith renewed- -this is beautiful |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and your new secret will bless you both it seems.*sigh* you have captured many emotions in this wonderful poem. May love fill your life for an eternity. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
karilea--wonderfully written...and sounding so familiar. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it and the title too..nicely written  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
she has a little secret and she keeps it to herself and through the gift of magic his poetry graces her shelf Beautifully written and I can relate to the last verse, but I will say no more as it is my little secret. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PdV...the love of write? Right!...thanks!... Mr. Yeats...I blush...thank you!... Startime...read it again...'tis only the secrets of womanhood that we all share... Martie...familiar from me...or familiar of you?... Victoria...thank you!...I do enjoy the creation of titles... Brian...and I would never ask...{~,^} |
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