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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2001-01-04 12:38 PM

“I AM”

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

I wonder if I will ever be able to make
some kind of difference in the world.

I hear my soul groping for loves
return to me.

I see Mother Nature and delight in her
ability to open the hearts of mankind.

I want to know I gave of myself whole
heatedly to all I could before I die.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

I pretend to breathe a sigh of relief because
the world is in a state of complete peace.

I feel life is passing me by and I will
never really experience true love.

I touch a delicate rose and see the love God
has for all of mankind.

I worry that mankind will destroy the
earth before he learns humility.

I cry for all of the souls that didn’t experienced
true happiness before there passing.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

I understand what it is to be lonely and
afraid.

I say all of mankind should walk in the steps
of his enemy.

I dream of a world that knows what true
contentment and joy means.

I try to help all of those that cross my path
with what ever means I have available.

I hope that all of the things mentioned in
this poem would come true.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

By, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-04 12:42 PM

I would say that you met the challenge well and of course I wish for you all that you presented before us. This was a wonderful piece to read and shows that there is a chance for us all as long as we can get more people thinking like you.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-01-04 12:59 PM

Sister Cerenity? This read like a writ unto your soul...is why I love this challenge..."know thyself" and sounds like ya do!!! Big Hugs...totally sweet and lovely!

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2001-01-04 01:03 AM

Splendid. The good lord smiles upon this piece of writing, I am sure.

LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2001-01-04 10:58 AM

Hi
Mark, Serenity,EagleScorpion

Thank you so much for your kind replys, I love this challenge it had wonderful results last time it went around and I saved all of them, we really got to know each other and right now there is alot of new friends here at passions so I think this challenge is great.

Love, Cerenity

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-01-04 12:49 PM

find the light now my friend. . . for you have certainly known the dark. . .

this is wonderful. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2001-01-04 01:19 PM

Cerenity, beautifully written poem and challenge well met,

"I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment".

I know that find these tresures guided by your caring and poetic heart.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2001-01-04 03:36 PM

Very tender write of who you are.
Deb

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2001-01-04 04:25 PM

Cerenity,
you lived up to your name of poet in this write.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

9 posted 2001-01-04 07:38 PM

I really liked how you spaced your lines giving each expression the attention desirved. I can give a hearty "Amen!!" for each of your statements in agreement. Very nicely written, Bob <><

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2001-01-04 08:25 PM

Cerenity,
If only. We must not ever give up.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

11 posted 2001-01-04 09:37 PM

Hi
Sven,Brian,BloomingRose,Kethry,LighthouseBob,Daniel,

Thank you so very much, I am humbled at your kindness and my soul has been blessed so very much by all of you here at passions with such loving thoughts and true caring for me and my search will go on but in much more contentment because of passions poets like yourselves, thank you again.

Love, cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

12 posted 2001-01-04 10:16 PM

cerenity...this is very well written and expressed. I'm sure you will find what you are looking for....

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

13 posted 2001-01-04 10:23 PM

BRAVO!!!How perfectly delightful. This is a wonderful way to get to know a wonderful person. I hope all your dreams come true for you have a very loving heart. Much love and hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2001-01-04 11:47 PM

Cerenity, my friend~
You are !
Yes, you are a friend of the heart of others.

'I touch a delicate rose and see the love God
has for all of mankind.'

This is just a lovely look into the mirror of you.
Big ole' *HUGS* to you !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

15 posted 2001-01-04 11:59 PM

I feel life is passing me by and I will
never really experience true love.

so many beautiful thoughts here,C..I just chose this for I wish upon you...to feel this experience

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

16 posted 2001-01-05 05:10 AM

Cerenity you'll find what you're looking for! This is very well done!!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

17 posted 2001-01-05 05:21 AM

wonderful penned...and you are a warm hearted person...loved reading it.

((hugs))
Charisma

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

18 posted 2001-01-05 11:53 AM

Hi

Balladeer,Startime,Marge,Wynter,Ethome,Charisma,

Thanks everyone, there's alot of special people here and this challenge has been alot of fun,thank you again for your kind replys.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

19 posted 2001-01-05 08:35 PM

i say all of mankind should walk in the steps of his enemy

this line caught me unaware..i never thought of it that way before and i think this gives us a glimpse as to how forgiving you are

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