Open Poetry #11 |
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I Am" Challenge |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California ![]() |
“I AM” I am humbly searching for my heart and souls contentment. I wonder if I will ever be able to make some kind of difference in the world. I hear my soul groping for loves return to me. I see Mother Nature and delight in her ability to open the hearts of mankind. I want to know I gave of myself whole heatedly to all I could before I die. I am humbly searching for my heart and souls contentment. I pretend to breathe a sigh of relief because the world is in a state of complete peace. I feel life is passing me by and I will never really experience true love. I touch a delicate rose and see the love God has for all of mankind. I worry that mankind will destroy the earth before he learns humility. I cry for all of the souls that didn’t experienced true happiness before there passing. I am humbly searching for my heart and souls contentment. I understand what it is to be lonely and afraid. I say all of mankind should walk in the steps of his enemy. I dream of a world that knows what true contentment and joy means. I try to help all of those that cross my path with what ever means I have available. I hope that all of the things mentioned in this poem would come true. I am humbly searching for my heart and souls contentment. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I would say that you met the challenge well and of course I wish for you all that you presented before us. This was a wonderful piece to read and shows that there is a chance for us all as long as we can get more people thinking like you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sister Cerenity? This read like a writ unto your soul...is why I love this challenge..."know thyself" and sounds like ya do!!! Big Hugs...totally sweet and lovely! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Splendid. The good lord smiles upon this piece of writing, I am sure. LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mark, Serenity,EagleScorpion Thank you so much for your kind replys, I love this challenge it had wonderful results last time it went around and I saved all of them, we really got to know each other and right now there is alot of new friends here at passions so I think this challenge is great. Love, Cerenity |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
find the light now my friend. . . for you have certainly known the dark. . . this is wonderful. . . ![]() --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cerenity, beautifully written poem and challenge well met, "I am humbly searching for my heart and souls contentment". I know that find these tresures guided by your caring and poetic heart. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very tender write of who you are. Deb |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cerenity, you lived up to your name of poet in this write. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Cerenity, If only. We must not ever give up. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven,Brian,BloomingRose,Kethry,LighthouseBob,Daniel, Thank you so very much, I am humbled at your kindness and my soul has been blessed so very much by all of you here at passions with such loving thoughts and true caring for me and my search will go on but in much more contentment because of passions poets like yourselves, thank you again. Love, cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
cerenity...this is very well written and expressed. I'm sure you will find what you are looking for.... ![]() |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!How perfectly delightful. This is a wonderful way to get to know a wonderful person. I hope all your dreams come true for you have a very loving heart. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity, my friend~ You are ! Yes, you are a friend of the heart of others. 'I touch a delicate rose and see the love God has for all of mankind.' This is just a lovely look into the mirror of you. Big ole' *HUGS* to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I feel life is passing me by and I will never really experience true love. so many beautiful thoughts here,C..I just chose this for I wish upon you...to feel this experience ![]() ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Cerenity you'll find what you're looking for! This is very well done!! |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful penned...and you are a warm hearted person...loved reading it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Balladeer,Startime,Marge,Wynter,Ethome,Charisma, Thanks everyone, there's alot of special people here and this challenge has been alot of fun,thank you again for your kind replys. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i say all of mankind should walk in the steps of his enemy this line caught me unaware..i never thought of it that way before and i think this gives us a glimpse as to how forgiving you are ![]() |
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