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I Am (Serenity's Challenge 2nd attempt)
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I Am (Serenity's Challenge 2nd attempt) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I Am I am like a bubble with rainbow hue, and I'm ever true I wonder if my lightness doesn't confuse and confound you I hear my heart talking as if she doesn't feel love so deep I see her, how she was before, locked within an ivory keep I want her to laugh and see the love light shining through I am like a bubble with rainbow hue, and I'm ever true I pretend that the past is burried and it didn't ever hurt me I feel the joy of freedom and am content to let the past be I touch the delight of freedom to make my own choices I worry that someday I'll hear again possessions' voices I cry when I think of the time I lost trying to get through I am like a bubble with rainbow hue, and I'm ever true I understand that all of us must live through some pain I say that within that pain filled test our spirits wisdom gain I dream that love and peace will spread through the land I try to offer my love and friendship it's token is my hand I hope that my heart will give her love to each one of you I am like a bubble with rainbow hue, and I am ever true Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perfect! [check your spelling...] {~,^} |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha. this is so true! Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very beautitful. Well done. Poeminister |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, where kid, I think I must be a little tired because I can't see it. The nuns used to put a big letter S through it. It's probably because I didn't use word love. And you know how dense I can be. Thank you sweet I'll E you tomorrow I promise Take care love Majestic Marsha  Kethry love, thank you love, I was trying to make it scan, does it? You know what it's like, if I put effort into it, I can't tell what it does. If I ever could. I much prefer the ones left by the poetry fairy. (Or inspired by my smile givers anyway) Take care love Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Poeminister, thank you so very very much. I do appreciate it. I'm sorry you must have replied while I was replying. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Reaching through my computer screen, I can almost touch your token of love and I do feel a since of your loss and the great gain these newly formed friendships have brought into you life.... Very well expressed, Bob <>< |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marsha, It is so very nice to meet you, this was wonderful,I really love this line,, "I hear my heart talking as if she doesn't feel love so deep" wonderful, challenge very wonderfully met. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob thanks love, I actually enjoyed this, I did this one twice but I actually think this is more me. Thank you very very kindly Take care Mushy Cerenity love thank you so very very much, since this is supposedly us this truly is me. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Softly beautiful as your heart and soul truly are. I love seeing within your rainbow bubble. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You are like a bubble with a rainbow hue and you are ever true...I loved this one my dear Mushy because you are those things I just see them in a beautiful poetic light and I hope you never change...ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen love, thank you so much sweetie, I hope it is a true reflection of me. Take care Mushy P T love, Oh how I owe you, you not going to call in the debt love are you. Because otherwise I'll be in indentured servitude for the rest of my natural. And I'm already working for a slaves wage, the NHS is going to the dogs don't you know. Thank you love, no I won't change I promise Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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