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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-04 09:22 AM



I Am

I am honest and I simply don't lie
I wonder if hearts break and die
I hear your spirit summon me
I see angels as wonder fill me
I want you to feel my hearts sigh
I am honest and I simply don't lie

I pretend that you are wrapped around me
I feel the heavens rock as this dream I see
I touch your heart with my souls' touch
I worry that you'll not desire me this much
I cry for those hearts that don't fly high
I am honest and I simply don't lie

I understand that loneliness makes you yearn
I say that from this painful time you will learn
I dream that you will come on back to me
I try to reach for the stars with my love to see
I hope you will find me there so high
I am honest and I simply don't lie


Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-04 09:32 AM


and now we know...

well done Marsha!

Marsha
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2 posted 2001-01-04 12:06 PM


Kari love, this was the first attempt, the second one is better I think  
Take care kid
                  Majestic Marsha
                          


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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3 posted 2001-01-04 12:07 PM


I'll check in out!
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4 posted 2001-01-04 03:39 PM


Mushy,
this absolutely fantabulous, wonderful, I'm ecstactic that I was able to read this, spendiferous write. As you can see I'm honest too.  
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Marsha
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5 posted 2001-01-04 05:04 PM


Kari love, and it is better isn't it? I know, this was an okay ish! But I definitely prefer the other one
Take care
                  Majestic Marsha
                          
Kethry love, I don't lie I just accentuate the positive, you know, that's not lying that's entirely different love.
And I won't add anymore because I'll remember to think before I speak. And I'm counting to ten times ten and the multiplied by it's own square root.
Take care love
               Slushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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