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kaile
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0 posted 2001-01-04 05:37 AM


when armstrong stepped on the moon,
he remarked,

"one small step for me,
one giant leap for mankind"

now of course, i cannot be compared on equal terms with this great man
but im sure i felt the same exhilaration as he did

when i surfed poetry websites
in plain open view of my peers...



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ethome
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1 posted 2001-01-04 05:45 AM


I'm glad you surfed in here some time ago so you could remind us of the beauty of the love and kindnees in this forum. It truly is a wonderful place to open your heart to your peers....and yes, I've felt that exhilaration myself....I really enjoyed this so much.
Denise
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2 posted 2001-01-04 08:19 PM


I know what you mean, Kaile! I'm sure glad you took that step!!

Denise

Daniel J D
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3 posted 2001-01-04 08:45 PM


Kaile,
Good thinking here.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Sven
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4 posted 2001-01-04 09:11 PM


kaile!!

what they must have said!!     well, hopefully, they said, "Wow kaile, you're a great poet!!"  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


brian madden
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5 posted 2001-01-05 01:50 PM


Kaile, and what a giant poetic step in was, we flow in your footsteps, shine on planetary poet

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Charisma
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6 posted 2001-01-05 02:12 PM


oh kaile...you translate the feelings of many I bet...I was feeling the same way too...still feeling that, as unsure as I am.

but I am glad that you share your poetry with us....you took the right step.

((hugs))
Charisma

dgvarner
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7 posted 2001-01-05 09:13 PM


...and they sd...watch him ride that awesome wave man!  ...    

i'm glad you surfed in too  

hugs, g

"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



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8 posted 2001-01-05 09:18 PM


Truley...and the travelling so much quicker in "here".  Wonderful write.



[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-05-2001).]

Nate Dogg
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9 posted 2001-01-06 02:35 PM


Thank you K, for the kind words....wonderful write!

Nathan

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