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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I miss my baby he's not here and no he's not not even there I don't think he is anywhere he's lost and I will follow there... I miss my baby he's not home left me here on my own I don't think he gives one good damn... I miss my baby, lonely, am... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Awww sweetie this piece is so sad and I felt your lonliness and longing, you've expressed your feelings well ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Girl........ You sure do a great job on the blues, and I'm saying that as a stage musician who sings mostly blues. I appreciated the deep feelings you wrote into this......I can feel your heart in there, and that, my friend, IS the blues. Good job!! (I am sorry, though, if you are feeling this kind of hurt, and to write like this, you must be. So, along with this reply, I'm sending hugs and wishes for better days......  )Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I miss my sweet also.. now you reminded me of that old song...think it was called "Singing the Blues" Well I never felt more like singin the blues cause I never thought that I'd ever lose your love dear. Why'd you do me this way. The moon and stars no longer shine. The dream is gone I thought was mine. There's nothing left for me to do but to cr-r-y-y-y-y over you. James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tracie..thank you so much, you are a love... and Sunny? would love to do some "circle blues" with you....love jazz too...have been known to "scat" on occasion...depends..rofl.. and James...omigoodness? WHO KNEW? PEOPLE? LET'S GIVE THIS MAN A BIG ROUND OF APPLAUSE...and um, you don't happen to blow the harp too? *wink* seriously? thank you. was lovely. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well if that's the blues then you got'em Cause there's hurt in your heart from top to bottom. You don't know what to do with this soul full of blues And there's tears fallin hard from your eyes to your shoes. That man sang forever now he's gone again But he ain't your lover ain't even your friend. Holes in your heart holes in your mind and you're left with the blues and worn out time. If this is the blues then you got'em now there's holes in your heart from the top to the bottom. I'm writing this for you Celeste...just add some Louisiana electric guitar and some tears and like John Lee says the blues will heal ya......great poem I really loved it I kind of got carried away. Hate to see ya so sad..love to ya ethome [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
merci beau coup, mon cherie... I guess it showed...sigh...thanks for the g'nite hug...guess I 'll go to bed now. Thank you lovie...and by the way? You passed the audition... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Need some harmony? *G* (Before you answer, I'll confess... I can't sing worth diddly. *G* But I can identify!) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Can I pull up a seat in this blues bar and join you in this song, I know it well. we can drink away our sorrows, well enjoyed the read It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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