Open Poetry #11 |
Words.....I hope they help my friend |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~WORDS~ I sense your sadness I feel your lonliness I wish there was something I could do ~~ All I have are words my friend These words I give to you ~~ Decisions in life Are hard sometimes Life's journey often Long and tough Many roads along the way Are often extremely rough ~~ Know that I'm not too far away Only a click in fact I'll be here to listen Send my winged ~HUGS~ floating back ~~ I'll never say That I'm disappointed I'll always understand That you my friend Should be happy Take life by the hand ~~ Let it wrap itself around you Smother you with it's love Hold you up With it's sweet essence Keep you there High above ~~ There is alot We can still learn Alot that she can tell I wish you every happiness in life Take care my friend Be well ~~ Floating my winged ~HUGS~ your way my friend ~Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is what makes Passions such a wonderful place to be a part of. You show your heart and share it well my friend. These words of comfort are sure to reach the soul of the one they were intended for. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark~ Hi there my friend....thanks for your reply Passions is a great place and I do hope my words can comfort the friend that they are intended for...thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I can only echo Mark....he have it right, this one is a jewel, and written with a caring loving heart. this is a keeper for sure. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Tracie, I must say I got all teary eyed reading this lovely poem you wrote for friend... These are such gentle loving words of heart... You're a sweet treasure and I thank you for this most enjoyable read... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Tracie that is such a wise and warm poem full of friedship love. Your friend has a true friend indeed...very very well done I love it!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi Charis Thanks very much hon for your sweet reply ~HUGS~ right back at ya Tracie~ Coco girl I'm so glad you liked and that you read and replied...much thanks sweetie ~HUG~ Tracie~ Ethome~ Hi there friend Wrote this for someone here at passions who needs a ~HUG~ and understanding, (she knows who she is)this is how I felt after an email she sent me...thanks for your comments they are always appreciated ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Truly inspirational Tracie ... friendship and love flow through these lines, sending out warm feelings of strength and compassion ... just beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is just another of the reasons that you're such a wonderful person tracie. . . wonderful poem my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ As always, your heart shows in all you say. Any friend would be fortunate to receive a Winged ~Hug~ from you. If it's okay with you, I'm gonna hitchhike on that *Hug* of yours, with one of my own. Thanks for the ride ... you sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
This is such a gentle and caring message for your friend. Thanks for shareing it with us. And a hug for you, ME |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Kit much thanks for your beautiful reply...~HUG~ Tracie~ Sven~ Thanks, your words are appreciated my friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Awww Margie This ones just for you sweetie ~HUG~ I'm smiling now my friend love ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie, this is just wonderful, I wish it was for me, but I'm going to grab those hugs anyway and pretend it was. write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I don't know who these words are intended for, but they touch my heart. I have a lot going on, so this brings tears to know there are people like you left in this world. Beautiful words you share. Hugs, Deb |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Keth~ Hon ride my ~HUGS~ anytime sweetie ~HUG~ Tracie~ BR~ If they touched you, I'm glad and here's a floating ~HUG~ for you as well Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
ME~ I'm sorry, I don't know how I missed you but I did ((sorry)) you get an extra HUG ~HUG~ ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aww Tracie..How sweet you are...I have a feeling I know just who these ~HUGS~ are for..She is a wonderful lady and deserves them so..and much more..This was so special...~hugs~ to you for her ~hugs~... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, In my opinion, these are more than just words. They are a portrait of friendship that all of us should be lucky enough to be a part of. May your friend feel the warmth of your love wash over her and be comforted by the angel winged hugs sent her way. I am betting she is feeling better already. she is very lucky to have a friend like you to lean on. Lovely sentiments my friend. ~HUGS~ to you, LW< !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ What a sweet gift of friendship you are. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
words can work magic!!!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LL~ Thanks for a lovely post and for your hugs all round ~HUG~ Tracie~ LW~ I know she knows that I care and I appreciate her friendship as much as she does mine, I feel honoured to have found so many wonderful friends here at passions and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your beautiful reply my friend...thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ Margie~ I feel so happy to have so many friends here and you my friend are just wonderful to me...thanks P.S I just love that angel ~HUG~ Tracie~ Kathleen~ So true, they can can't they...thanks sweetie ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Tracie, I firmly believe that what you have is a gift. There are not many people in this cruel world that have the ability to see past there own issues in life and reach out to help someone else. It's people like you who make this world go 'round! Great poem by the way < !signature--> ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Irie~ What a special reply you have written...thanks Your response has touched me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart ~HUG~ Tracie~ P.S I can't be there in person for my friend but only hope that my words can help, even if only a little. Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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