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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 2001-01-03 07:10 PM


Another day
a new year
tenuous smile
nothing to fear

a hand to hold
dreams to share
simple touch
for two who care

I promise nothing
tell no lies
for what I give
has no ties

Tomorrow begins
I stand alone
to give my heart
all that I own...

© Copyright 2001 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-01-03 08:04 PM


The gift of your heart is more than anyone could hope for.  Beautiful write and expressed with the grace of a true lady.  May this year be a blessed one for you.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-01-03 08:17 PM


RainbowGirl~
And that's a great big heart, sweet lady.
May the new year find you with sweet expectations
and dreams and promises fulfilled.
Much love to you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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3 posted 2001-01-03 09:18 PM


This is lovely, Cindy, just as you are!

Denise

jwesley
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4 posted 2001-01-03 09:25 PM


Anyone wanting more than the gift of "you" isn't worthy of the gift in the first place.

Loved the write..

jwesley

DYME
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5 posted 2001-01-04 12:03 PM


BEAUTIFUL. JUST BEAUTIFUL.

DYME


NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

Martie
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6 posted 2001-01-04 01:45 AM


Cindy--hi there..what a lovely poem!
Krawdad
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7 posted 2001-01-04 01:59 AM


I like the simplicity of the ideas and your presentation.  Such a nice inviting way to start a new year.  Very "comfortable".  Well done!
Stan
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8 posted 2001-01-04 03:00 AM


Hello Cindy,

Thanks for this nice poem.  It has a universal message.  Others less talented than you will quote it and send along the thoughts. You get double dip that way for your inspiration!  

tracie66
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9 posted 2001-01-04 03:03 AM


RainbowGirl~
Delightful, tender piece, well penned  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Agust P
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10 posted 2001-01-04 03:38 AM


Very open and beutiful... thanks a lot
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11 posted 2001-01-04 08:47 AM


Well... it took long enough for you to get back to writing. *G* But it was worth the wait!!! This is beautiful... and I can't think of a lovelier gift than you, dear friend!!!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
12 posted 2001-01-04 09:30 AM


"all that you own"
and you gift it to us...

Wonderful!

Sven
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13 posted 2001-01-04 09:32 PM


again. . . a gift given. . . will always be returned many times over. . .

wonderful. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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14 posted 2001-01-04 09:40 PM


Rainbow, any man who receives all that you own has the greatest treasure in the world...


(does that include Snoops?   )

spiked
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15 posted 2001-01-04 09:45 PM


What more could anyone ask? Love this one
Rich

RainbowGirl
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16 posted 2001-01-05 09:39 PM


Thank you, you each in your own individual ways gave me a much needed hug...thank you

HUGS

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