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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Another day a new year tenuous smile nothing to fear a hand to hold dreams to share simple touch for two who care I promise nothing tell no lies for what I give has no ties Tomorrow begins I stand alone to give my heart all that I own... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The gift of your heart is more than anyone could hope for. Beautiful write and expressed with the grace of a true lady. May this year be a blessed one for you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl~ And that's a great big heart, sweet lady. May the new year find you with sweet expectations and dreams and promises fulfilled. Much love to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Cindy, just as you are! Denise |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Anyone wanting more than the gift of "you" isn't worthy of the gift in the first place. Loved the write.. jwesley |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
BEAUTIFUL. JUST BEAUTIFUL. DYME NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cindy--hi there..what a lovely poem! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I like the simplicity of the ideas and your presentation. Such a nice inviting way to start a new year. Very "comfortable". Well done! |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Hello Cindy, Thanks for this nice poem. It has a universal message. Others less talented than you will quote it and send along the thoughts. You get double dip that way for your inspiration! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
RainbowGirl~ Delightful, tender piece, well penned  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
Very open and beutiful... thanks a lot |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well... it took long enough for you to get back to writing. *G* But it was worth the wait!!! This is beautiful... and I can't think of a lovelier gift than you, dear friend!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"all that you own" and you gift it to us... Wonderful! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
again. . . a gift given. . . will always be returned many times over. . . wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Rainbow, any man who receives all that you own has the greatest treasure in the world... (does that include Snoops?  ) |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
What more could anyone ask? Love this one Rich |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you, you each in your own individual ways gave me a much needed hug...thank you HUGS |
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