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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'll always love you He says as he walks out the door If this is your idea of love I dont want it anymore I want a heart That is gentle and true Someone to stand by me And that someones not you So go on Leave...goodbye...go The scars you have inflicted They wont always show Theres someone out there A man thats so fine I know I will find him And I'll make him mine So hey all you fellas All you poets and such The position is open And I dont bite...much So come on take a chance This ladys' heart is free Come get to know All that makes me...me I'm a poet A dreamer, a lover, a friend I'm the one who'll stand by you Right up to the end If a faithful heart Is what you are looking for I can give you that And so much more So if you want you can call At BR549 Or send me a letter That would be fine I'm waiting and wondering Which of you will be bold And which will be left out In the loveless cold... [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 11-21-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Paula, Paula, What a beautiful ad, you really threw me off my chair, I was about to make my way to you, then I realised I had a ring on my hand. Such is life, maybe somewhere, sometime........ Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yeah.....this is the best ad that I think I've ever read. It's honest, to the point, loving, and describes you beautifully, my twin!! I predict that this ad will receive many, many applicants.......have fun with your new friends, and it will be good to see that smile back on your face!!  Follow your dream! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula I sure would like to apply but a few local women have caught my eye and you deserve a faithful guy so I'll wish and hope with all my might that you find a man that will treat you right. You really wrote this good. Wishing you happiness as always... James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Hey Paula...(remember that song) I never heard one with my name in it... So hey all you fellas All you poets and such The position is open And I dont bite...much cute...I am always saying I don't bite much, guess no one believes me or maybe they want someone who bites more  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, go on girl go and get him, he's out there, you know I believe that. Somewhere is the man that is waiting for you. Okay you may have to round a lot of corners and I'm amazed at the number of frogs you have to kiss. (You'd think that there would be some other way to tell a prince from a frog wouldn't you?) Still I suppose it's okay if you don't mind the rather odd looks. Great personal ad love, and I know you will get loads of replies. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh you little deviless you you're asking for it...gonna get all the guys worked up now and they won't be able to write poetry right .. they'll all be excited rushibg for that woman with the open loving warm heart...I like the wonderfu; down to earth appeal of this poem Paula and you truly are a sweetheart....ethome |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel...LOL off your chair huh? I know somewhere sometime...do I really have to wait that long? Thanks Sunny...I'm hoping...just gotta wait and see now...love ya twin James...well you always have a place in my heart you know that...thanks Wynter...hmmmm never thought about that...bite HARDER hehehe...ok I can do that too (and yes I KNOW that song LOL) Marsha...OMG kissing frogs...kissing FROGS? Do I gotta? I was kinda hoping for that dark knight...thank you sweetie ethome...thank you...you arent so bad yourself...waiting for your personal reply LOL... |
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