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Forever Finite
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Forever Finite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Forever finite I hang by a silver thread Over the abyss of why. By an aging fear and dread That I'll never learn to fly. I rage in my space of time Holding by the grace of age Tolling of the final chime Turning of another page. But it does no good to rage For the curtain will drop, while Sands of time will sow their gage And the play has played the wile. It means I will never fly That in truth had been my goal Haunt affinities as I Fathom depths of my sweet soul. So once again will come the night Forever finite in its flight. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It isn't the flight That's left us sighing For your brilliant insight - It's more the trying. The limits that bind And cause your rages Set you free to find A voice for the ages. In other words... we love you just the way you are. *S* Well done! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
infinity's dreams sigh high on beams never what he seems casting about for finite means engage the rage of sage! held high in might of age and in the gauge be assuaged of goals from souls engaged love your silver threads! Hugs... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
have no doubts ... quiet those fears calm the rage ... shed no tears find your grace ... in infinities goal ... quiet comfort ... for your sweet soul silver threads ... words of spun gold wisdom spoken ... to have and to hold forever finite ... a poets words never die by your poetry ... you learned to fly winds of change ... sands of time find your wings ... within your rhyme dread not ... the return of night trust me baby ... you've already taken flight ******** do you see how you evoke emotion and inspire us?? now ... tell me again ... how you never learned to fly. *winkiewinkie* later-look at you soar-gator love you Sy-guy me Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, A beautiful comment and I thank you. Karilea, A clever and thoughtful comment. *L* JM, OK I'm posting another poem. Winkiewinkie. PS. Lovely poetic answer. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
silver threads aren't they a sign of wisdom.....love ya silver threads (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Hugs right back, you mean silver threads among the gold. *L* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent Seymour! Great sumation and insight with introspect...good work my friend...very good!.....ethome |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Love your comment and thank you much. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it's so true sy so true yuh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wayout, Thank you so much for the read and coment. |
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