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DYME
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0 posted 2001-01-03 01:21 AM


Dreaming                      **6/12/00**

Now I lay my head upon my pillow
And drift into an endless sleep
I see your face, hear your voice, feel your touch
And yet your only an image
When I open my eyes, my dreams become reality
But the pleasure is mine awake or dreaming

DYME


NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-01-03 03:46 AM


This is a great idea, my friend...for the fantasy or dream turns into a reality upon waking!! Enjoyed this one very much!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
2 posted 2001-01-03 08:10 PM


I know the dreams and long for them to be real maybe one day. enjoyed the read,

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
3 posted 2001-01-03 11:46 PM


yuh when the mesh together is when it gets to the head scratching part yuh. nice write
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