Lay down ... to Brian& Michael (the reason I was born)

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Open Poetry #11

Lay down ... to Brian& Michael (the reason I was born)

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-02 10:07 PM

Lay down

to Brian & Michael
(the reason i was born)

lay down
my weary child
rest that head of wonder
I shall keep you safe and warm
as you sweetly slumber
and as you sleep this promise keep
while you lay beneath the starry sash
the dream queen will kiss each and every lash
where angel wings
bring sweet dreams
of flying things
dancing on moonbeams
sand castles in the snow
where you can only tell me of
and only you can go
a mother's wish
bliss fullness
go softly as you flow

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 01-03-2001).]

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

1 posted 2001-01-02 10:10 PM

A beautifully written piece. Thank you for sharing with us.

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

2 posted 2001-01-02 10:23 PM

Wow! This really is beautiful...and provokes gorgeous imagery. You have a wonderful way with words. Keep up the good 'work'.

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

3 posted 2001-01-02 10:48 PM

What a write. i loved it. I so enjoyed the read.
Love and light,
Richard

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-01-03 12:04 PM

Lovely and sweet...and made me miss my babies...(still here..just TALL...) nice work with this.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 2001-01-03 12:17 PM

sweet sweet lullaby

spiked
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

6 posted 2001-01-03 01:47 AM

This is a beautiful tribute to your sons. Nicely done
Rich

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2001-01-04 11:24 PM

nice poem to our boys H...
still think could be lyrics for a song..
bernie

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