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Some Music
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Some Music |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Some Music In the hollow of the wind, wrings rings of a kind Play o'er the rungs o'er the strings of my mind Play enormity I cannot explain Inanity of informality. Sound interned with fantasy, with a neat Drumming ecstasy in its beat That turns round and incases me To cavort as I never sport before. I hear and feel vibrations running wild swirl Of constant cadence that whirl and twirl Low and slow in its subtle flow With the power of show in its sew. It prowls, howls and growls, it sings Variations sowing pleasure and pain in its ring I am floating free without a base without a face I am listening to eternity. Eternity's apogee on fly And will awake in the wake of I. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It flows....and feels like velvet... Wow... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I hear and feel vibrations running wild swirl Of constant cadence that whirl and twirl Low and slow in its subtle flow With the power of show in its sew ----------------------------- Eternity's apogee on fly And will awake in the wake of I. ============================= Now this was one heck of a write and carries with it much insight. Wonderful penning from you as usual...I really enjoyed this one and it is among one of my favorites of yours, but there are too many to have just one favorite. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I hear and feel vibrations running wild swirl Of constant cadence that whirl and twirl Low and slow in its subtle flow With the power of show in its sew ----------------------------- Eternity's apogee on fly And will awake in the wake of I. ============================= Now this was one heck of a write and carries with it much insight. Wonderful penning from you as usual...I really enjoyed this one and it is among one of my favorites of yours, but there are too many to have just one favorite. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I hear and feel vibrations running wild swirl Of constant cadence that whirl and twirl Low and slow in its subtle flow With the power of show in its sew. It prowls, howls and growls, it sings Variations sowing pleasure and pain in its ring I am floating free without a base without a face I am listening to eternity. Eternity's apogee on fly And will awake in the wake of I. ================= "I hear and feel vibrations running wild swirl Of constant cadence that whirl and twirl --------- I am floating free without a base without a face I am listening to eternity." what a poetic coincidence ... the EXACT SAME thing happends to me when I read your poetry ... way cool huh?  ... yes you are ... so is this poem*winkiewinkie* me Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sound interned with fantasy, with a neat Drumming ecstasy in its beat That turns round and incases me To cavort as I never sport before. ......gonna try this one I think...someday... very very nicely done..I am encouraged to increase my vocabulary when reading you...  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes.........I feel the neat drumming ecstasy, and always the fantasy!! I thoroughly enjoyed this, Sy, as I do with all of your poetry....  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I can't really express what i felt while reading this poem, but in some way I felt as if I was experiencing the emotions of the poem first hand and it was a wonderful feeling. < !signature--> It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Seymour-If this music could only be captured on a cassette so I can play it in my car. I could use your soothing musical words before I go in to work. This was wonderful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Thanks for the WOW. *L* Mark, Your coments are as good as your poetry, thanks. JM, I thank you and my randy dragon thanks you. Winkiewinkie Sweety Nakd, Thank you, thank you for the very very. Sunny1, Nothing like a little drumming ecstasy. Brian, You really got the message. Gemini, Thank you, but I wouldn't want you to drive while being that intent. |
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