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When I am All Alone
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When I am All Alone |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
When I am all alone, Sit and wonder why And what Is store for me? In life, Watch the stars so bright, Wanted so much That I can dream of only, When I am all alone, Think of love that would come to me, And held me tight, When I am all alone I sit and Take my pen To start off to write a song, About love and loneliness, When Iam all alone, Candlelight, The roses are red, I touch the petal And think of the past, Oh, How time go by fast, But the petal slowly faded As the night grew longer, Knew how long the rose would stay? Like a single petal falls Upon me As time went by, When I am all alone, Think of my life, Wonder If love would really come and take my heart away, When Iam all alone, I don't know What to do? Without you, When Iam all alone, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Vandana, I see a lot of tenderness in this writing of yours. Also some sadness, but to write like this, it must come from your heart. BC |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Being alone and left to think about so many things can really suck at times. Then there are other times that it's great to think of wonderful memories. I can relate to this entirely..... ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ This is a lovely piece. Your heart talks so softly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
vandana- what a quiet and tender write..  beautiful... hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice Vandana...I don't like the feeling that I am alone...so I keep myself busy so I don't think about it...doesn't always work...I feel most comfortable in a companionship type of relationship...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Such real feelings in this one, and I felt it, a very honest poem here, I enjoyed it. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such a soft forlorn song...like listening to you whisper in the dark...Excellent writing~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thsnk you all |
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