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LoVe EnTaNgLeD !
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LoVe EnTaNgLeD ! |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
LoVe EnTaNgLeD ! Lancelot {Bilal} © 2000 Love in infinity Lasts for eternity Has to be traffic 2 way Give and take it every day Parents love child Even if (s)he's wild Child love parent Pretty much apparent Husband loves wife Wife's hubby her life Tree of love shades all Helps us up when we fall Pain is there but also gain As good as vacation in Spain Love if real, lasts forever Keeps on flowing like eternal river Religion is guidance for us all So that in hell we don't fall Love for Allah and His creatures Makes you wanna love even miniatures Then in end we've to die Ever wondered then, to where you fly? If you know how to love all round Then hereafter would be safe'n'sound! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lot's of nice spiritual supplication for the reader to consider in this poem....the wonderful qualities of love portrayed so well... even like a vaction in Spain eh? Well...I've been to Spain and I found it to be a fascinating place....take care ethome |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Well Thank you very much for commenting. and yes I heard Spain is a nice place. I may go there when I win a lottery or something.  )Take good care. Bilal |
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