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Desires |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
~DESIRES~ I think of you Crave your touch Shaking, fever raging From my desire for you I imagine your lips Deliciously warm Trembling body Unsated Needing your touch Closing my eyes I try to rest Thoughts of you win out I can taste you on my lips Dreaming, yet awake Hungry for your kiss Caresses remembered Hidden places explored The passionate night has fled Leaving not a trace But a trail of fire I think of you Wanting your touch The brush of your lips against my neck A mere caress across my flesh ~DESIRES~ unleashed for you The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, how did you know what is on my mind right now?  "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLightning~ Very softly and sensually done. Enjoyed this one a lot. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Nicely done, I liked! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* incredible passion in this poem. Wonderful. I know just how you feel. Much love and a New Years hug from me to you . |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful descriptive piece, great read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh yes. . . I loved this one. . . indeed. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Irish Rose...Lol..I don't know how I knew...Just came from the top of my head so I hurried and wrote it down...Thanks for stopping by... ~LL~ Marge...Thanks so much for you sweet words...Glad you liked it... Hugs... ~LL~ EagleOne...Thank you...Glad you liked!!! ~LL~Startime...I so appreciate the kind words...Thanks so much...Happy New Year to you also... Hugs.. ~LL~ tracie66..Thanks for reading....I appreciate your thoughts...much... ~LL~ Sven...Indeed, I'm so glad you liked this one...Thanks so much.... ~LL~ < !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
whoa baby ... who let the horses out of the barn..  LOLvery nicey and spicy LL ... me likes ... me almost remembers what this feels like...  very cool poem Lady L ...very expressive later-hotstuff-gator me |
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lisad Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22 |
`LL`, very nicely penned.. Very decriptive and lord knows that this poem is one of your best yet... this one will indeed go to my library... love ya cupts, lisad |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this one could perk up a hot cup or two. Wonderful writing my friend. The emotions are captured well and the feel of the whole piece ebbs out of this one. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
OMG I was already in a mood this morning (and every other time ) and I read this. Gee lady this is hot. I loved it. I'm going to get all wrinkled from all the cold showers this morn. Love and light, Richard |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The title is perfect for this hot little number! Very well written, LL! Denise |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
mmm..good thoughts....  woohoo!! this is wonderful, LADY!! what we all dream of..i've had these dreams..many times.. hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Beautiful poem filled with pure honesty and voice! Yes, I have felt these desires for a long time now, but if you keep true to your dreams and hopes, your desires will become reality! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow there is some some hot passionate desire cooking in this poem....there is one lucky guy out there somewhere...open and intense...good writing! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Lady L, Beautiful! May all your desires of love and passion come true. Your words transported me to another time, and I could almost feel that way again... Love, Elise |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Janet Marie...LOL..I let them out, of course... Thanks for your sweet, sweet words..I can always count on you to be here with your wonderful replies...Glad you liked this one...It came to me out of the blue this morning... Thanks again... Hugs to you JM... ~LL~lisad...Hey girl...I knew you would be here to see this one even if no one else showed up...lol..So glad you liked it..A favorite? Oh goody..I like that!!!..Hugs to you , many many of em'...Love ya too...cupts... ~LL~ Mark...Thanks for reading..I appreciate you stopping by...As for perking a hot cup or two...Me thinks me pot is broken...Later Cowboy... ~LL~ Richard...OMG!!!..lol.. You are too good to me...I am so glad you liked this and the effect it had on you..My-My!! Thanks my sweet friend for the sweet words.... Hugs.. ~LL~ Denise...Thank you so much for stopping in and reading...Glad you liked... ~LL~dgvarner...And I get a woohoo too!!!..lol..Thanks so much for the sweet words from you...I so appreciate you taking time to stop and read... ~LL~ Noah...Thanks for the wonderful reply...Yes, stay true to your hopes and dreams and eventually they will become your reality..Of this I have no doubt...Thanks again... ~LL~ ethome...Thank you so much for the sweet words...I really didn't write this with anyone special person in mind..Just kinda got in my head...lol..I really appreciate you stopping in for the read..Thanks...Much... ~LL~ athena4...Thanks so much for your reply..And yes, I'm sure all my desires will come true, they always do eventually..Thanks again..I really appreciate you stopping here to read my work... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these thoughts......love the desire that sounds through your words well done. Charisma |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Charisma..Thanks so much for your kind, sweet words...Appreciate it much... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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