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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-01-02 03:30 AM

Upon your return I welcome you
my heart.. a bouquet..my love true
my lips a springtime of eternal kisses
your image showers me with joy

within petals of bluebonnet meadows
your love protects like a buoy
in the moonlight when all is still
only the echo of a whippoorwill

our love shining, a beacon light upon the sea
your love is an aura..a frame around me
the bouquet of our love haunts the night
creeping, a tiger in a jungle of moonlight

in bluebonnet meadows my love blooms
wearing only a scent of sweet perfume

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2001-01-02 04:07 AM

Victoria~
Your whole bouquet was so beautiful but this stanza my fav simply devine

Upon your return I welcome you
my heart.. a bouquet..my love true
my lips a springtime of eternal kisses
your image showers me with joy

Lovely piece
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-01-02 05:07 AM

You sure know how to write about the beauty of the love that fills your heart and soul. You do it so well...everyone should be that much in love to desire to write like that. Beautiful love poem V!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-01-02 08:14 AM

thank you traci..im so pleased you enjoyed..

ethome..love is grand ...and always an inspiration..thank you for your kind comments..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-01-02 08:35 AM

these is the most wonderful bouquet ..and filled with a lot of love indeed.
wonderful piece my friend

((hugs))
Charisma

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-01-02 12:18 PM

thank you charisma...yes the best kind ha..appreciate your read very much

~V~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2001-01-02 12:24 PM

Sounds as if you captured all the beauty of the world in this one from the sea to the meadows. Wonderful write my friend. Nice way to celebrate love.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2001-01-02 12:47 PM

I liked your sonnet, except for the
Second line in the second stanza,
your love protects like a buoy
I liked the image it project, but the rhyme?
A minor flaw, but perhaps you pronounce
Buoy differently than I do.

Enjoyed the read.

Gloom

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

8 posted 2001-01-02 02:06 PM

our love shining, a beacon light upon the sea
your love is an aura..a frame around me
the bouquet of our love haunts the night
creeping, a tiger in a jungle of moonlight

Loved that part especially, beautiful poem, very tender, makes me sigh.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

9 posted 2001-01-02 02:18 PM

Victoria.....
I get such great pleasure out of reading your work, and this one was wonderful...like a breath of fresh Spring air!! Great one, my friend, and Happy New Year to you!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-01-02 02:49 PM

always beautiful writing, ~V~

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2001-01-02 02:55 PM

mark..thank you so much..always so nice hearing from you

Professor..maybe i have been pronouncing it wrong all these years haa.. *boy*..instead of boyee..glad you liked the image anyway..nice to hear from you

HAPPY NEW YEAR

brian..ha.. sigh away brian..thank you...pleased you enjoyed.

Sunny..HUGS TO YOU..HOPE your new year is
a very happy one..

pleased you enjoyed

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2001-01-02 02:57 PM

OOPS..How did you sneak in there Wynter haa..thank you for peeking in hon..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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