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Manda_1982 Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 24Washington State,USA |
In the place between awake and asleep, is where I dream of you. no... I dream of you in those places too. ~Was falling asleep in the car on the way home from a family member's house. And as I drifted off, I thought of this. Wrote it down when I woke up... might expand it later on though, let me know what you think. Thanks! ~Manda~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The old subconscious was drifting toward your heart's desire...not uncommon but beautiful! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Manda, short and sweet, I hope you do expand on it. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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