Open Poetry #11 |
One Touch Surrendering |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
One Touch Surrendering Wrap me into nights fold paint me softly on a canvas of dreams where thoughts meet across boundaries and I shall surrender to moments...of your touch. ~Soft kisses~ shall I place, delicate as a whisper or with hardened edge to carve my image into your mind. Stroke me with your words, let me journey into your tomorrow. As vanilla candles scent the air and the dark beckons, reveal to me that part of you that veils my heart, caressing, drifting we, in timeless hold. And as indigo fills the night I shall surrender to your voiced loving, embraced by the feel of your body, the soft sweetness in sharing that which is mine, unfolding, and from one touch, the colours of the night shall be woven into our hearts and minds, wants and needs, Bathing me forever in your charms. Each night, feeling the tracings of your love, every moment turning, leaving me breathless, as I await in the flickering shadows, to surrender in the dark to the reality of your loving from just one touch... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
gee Lady I have been in a mood all day and our poem sets me off again. I love it, so romantic and soft. great writing, Love and light, Richard |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Afternoon Wynter, This last verse of your writing has touched me. A romantic you are, and I sense you're back into your writings more than you ever were, since I've been reading them. Bathing me forever in your charms. Each night, feeling the tracings of your love, every moment turning, leaving me breathless, as I await in the flickering shadows, to surrender in the dark to the reality of your loving from just one touch... A wonderfully written poem of inner most feelings Wynter. Thanks for sharing it with me. BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Richard glad you liked "our" poem ~softsmiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
whether its yours ours or mine or his haa i like it ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a very tender and amazing touch. loved the poem. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* I know that I'll surrender. . . this is very soft and Romantic. . . beautiful Wynter. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Reading instead of writing is going to be very relaxing, this is wonderful, Thank you!!!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Reading instead of writing is going to be very relaxing, this is wonderful, Thank you!!!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Simply beautiful, Wynter. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful soft, warm, sensuous and full of inner feelings. I really loved the romantic flow of this....which I might add....you do so very well....take care...ethome |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bill - it's easy to write romantically when I am touched by so many others words on here..and they reach inside me and draw out hidden feelings. Thank you sweet one ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~ you are too much, yes I am not sure what Richard meant but it is a poem for "all" who like "the touch" Brian- it's a always nice to touch you with words..thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven- you must watch your words, Sweet Sven...*teasing you..thank you for the smile you just gave me... Kathleen- relax all you want..it is "free" huggzz Sandra- smiling at you..some moments in some days are wonderfully inspiring E-thank you for the "soft, warm,and sensuous" ...and for responding so beautifully My thanks to all ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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