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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-31 12:58 PM


Like A Bubble

Like a bubble with it's rainbow hues and light as air
Your love was like a bubble and bursting it wasn't fair
I was amazed and wondering that you could love me
And I was right to be skeptical now that I can see
I never believed that I was the person you said you saw
It's my fault that my heart is lying on the cold hard floor

Like a mist draping over, clouding and obscuring the view
Your love was like a mist now I've lost the touch of you
I didn't comprehend that you'd really want all of me
And now I understand your heart needs to be free
I've never fathomed the workings of my blinded heart
It's my fault that this wretchedness began to even start

Like a dream gone in fragments that remember loves touch
Your love was a dream my heart misses you so very much
I was bewildered by the idea that you had chosen me
And I was right this love wasn't ever really meant to be
I've always been surprised by the fascination of me for you
It's my fault that I believed I found a heart that was true


Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2000-12-31 01:01 PM


Oh Marsha, these dreams can come true! Yes, dreams will soon touch reality for everyone, and you will find that special heart that touches your heart in this dream and the many other lovely dreams you have! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ethome
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2 posted 2000-12-31 01:16 PM


Hey Mushy you're going to be OK because you're just too fine a person and the world has to realize that the loving warm and open people like you need to set the example of what truth and homesty is all about. Maybe the rest of the world can finally realize the advantages of that!  
Sure you loved him and you wanted it to work but the truth being known he may be the one who has lost! Especially as I and many others know you through this open poetry board... love to you......ethome

maxtec1
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3 posted 2000-12-31 01:24 PM


let me hold you
kiss away your fear
whisper truths
soft on your ear

I will lead you
to light of love
together hand and hand
flying far above


Okay dear not sure where this came from but there it is. Dear friend i know all to well the pain of which you seak. Great writing,

Love and light,
Richard

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4 posted 2000-12-31 02:07 PM


Marsha~

Lots of new bubbles !

~*Marge*~


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Denise
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5 posted 2000-12-31 02:17 PM


Marge is right, Mushy! There are lots of bubbles out there and you will find your true love-bubble one day!  

Denise

Marsha
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6 posted 2001-01-01 09:17 AM


Noah thank you so very much, I do appreciate it, I honestly do.
                 Take care
                      
P T love, thank you so muchly, I really do. I will continue to grow and glow, the world still has hope, and there is always love in the world. Thank you kid, I'll be fine, this was before my dinner, certainly before the wine. And it reminded me what fun there is in this world we live in.
And no matter how nimble my tongue was even I couldn't manage

I'm not a pheasant plucker I'm a pheasant plucker's son and I'm only plucking pheasants until the pheasant plucker comes.

I think my version sounded better   But I would wouldn't I.  
Take care love
                 Mushy
                    
Richard, thank you love, that is very sweet of you, I'll get there. I may be down on my knees, I may be a bit punch drunk but I will stand and walk tall again.
Take care
               Mushy
                  
Margie, thank you love, I'll float up on them, and I will like tham rise.
Take care and thank you very much
               Mushy
                  
Denise, Thank you so very muchly, and I will be fine. I know it.
Take care
              Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-01-01 09:20 AM


{{{{{HUGS}}}}}

Marsha
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8 posted 2001-01-01 09:29 AM


Kari love it happens, I will lift up my eyes and I will see heaven from here.
Thank you love, take care
               Majestic Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2001-01-01 09:42 AM


Beautifully and sorrowfully written ...  You have the most wonderful heart Marsha, and I have no doubts that you will indeed find the one to treasure it and hold it safely for the warmth and gentleness that it truly deserves.

Best wishes and hugs to you,
/Kit

Kethry
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10 posted 2001-01-01 02:30 PM


Marsha,
your heart is showing.  
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Marsha
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11 posted 2001-01-01 05:14 PM


Kit love, thank you so very very much, one of the reasons I love it so much here is that there are so many loving poets around. You know how much I appreciate you don't you love. I do hope so. Because I really do.
Take care
                Mushy
                  
Kethry love, and words are not enough to say enough thanks to you love. As always you are there
Take care
              Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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