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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-31 11:03 AM




Carve On

before the word
before the page
there reached across
the word of sage

from the heart
from within the chest
mankind gave
to us his best

Carve On



came the scribe
of man's tribe
in voice of thunder
made man wonder

carried the tales
of life's history
shared with all
His story

Carve On



deep with my soul there reigns
a calling deep in this domain
that perhaps one day beyond the pall
there shall ring within the call

to Carve On

Carve on reflections
carve on the write
carve your soul deep
into the night
wend your words
and mighty thought
leave behind memory
so that we're taught
to carve on

carve on some bone
some rock, then hone
into a book a
treasured tome
leave your mark,
leave it clear
carve on into the heart
to be held so dear

Carve On…



then carve us all a circle
to bring us all herein
where we see the loving
compassion and caring
carve the curve of living
carve the warmth of friend
Carve On and in your writings
see this circle of homecoming

Carve On


12.31.00

© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-12-31 11:12 AM


What a wonderful thought for a poem....I love it...and more than just a whittle bit!  
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2 posted 2000-12-31 11:14 AM


Here I gave care and attention, just to have it whittled away...sigh when will I learn...{~,^} thank you my 'Deer friend...

Wilfred Yeats
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3 posted 2000-12-31 11:55 AM


I felt as though I were reading my own thoughts on why I write - expressed, as so often I find reading you, far more beautifully than I ever could.
These words came home especially:
"deep with my soul there reigns
a calling deep in this domain
that perhaps one day beyond the pall
there shall ring within the call

to Carve On"


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4 posted 2000-12-31 12:41 PM


these beauty goes right in my library.....wonderful written....wonderful penned.....haven't the right words to tell you how I love it.

happy new year my friend

(((warm hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2000-12-31 03:25 PM


no need to worry my friend. . . you have indeed left your mark. . .

excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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6 posted 2001-01-01 09:26 AM


Mr. Yeats, your kind words are now carved on my heart...thank you...

Charisma my friend, thank you...

Sven, what, me worry? LOL...nah, I'm more like the "don't worry, be happy" song...thanks for reading!...

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