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Carve On [with thanks to DreamSeeker]
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Carve On [with thanks to DreamSeeker] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Carve On before the word before the page there reached across the word of sage from the heart from within the chest mankind gave to us his best Carve On  came the scribe of man's tribe in voice of thunder made man wonder carried the tales of life's history shared with all His story Carve On  deep with my soul there reigns a calling deep in this domain that perhaps one day beyond the pall there shall ring within the call to Carve On Carve on reflections carve on the write carve your soul deep into the night wend your words and mighty thought leave behind memory so that we're taught to carve on carve on some bone some rock, then hone into a book a treasured tome leave your mark, leave it clear carve on into the heart to be held so dear Carve On…  then carve us all a circle to bring us all herein where we see the loving compassion and caring carve the curve of living carve the warmth of friend Carve On and in your writings see this circle of homecoming Carve On 12.31.00 |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a wonderful thought for a poem....I love it...and more than just a whittle bit!  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Here I gave care and attention, just to have it whittled away...sigh when will I learn...{~,^} thank you my 'Deer friend... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I felt as though I were reading my own thoughts on why I write - expressed, as so often I find reading you, far more beautifully than I ever could. These words came home especially: "deep with my soul there reigns a calling deep in this domain that perhaps one day beyond the pall there shall ring within the call to Carve On" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
these beauty goes right in my library.....wonderful written....wonderful penned.....haven't the right words to tell you how I love it. happy new year my friend (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no need to worry my friend. . . you have indeed left your mark. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, your kind words are now carved on my heart...thank you... Charisma my friend, thank you... Sven, what, me worry? LOL...nah, I'm more like the "don't worry, be happy" song...thanks for reading!... |
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