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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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one more time simple silver all that me? my heart, delivers..... simple blue stone on my thumb... reminds me of the only one... I placed it there in troth of you reminding me that I? love......you. a filagree upon my thumb... my thoughts they speak of only one... an echo of eternity? a silver love's fatality and every part of me--- re-done.... simple silver sun, undone... and oh dear god... palm best in me... keep me plan's delivery? a spark of life's totality? silver, simple.. love, undone.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simple beauty |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"a spark of life's totality? silver, simple.. love, undone..." What a plaintive cry you've written here Celeste and done it so well from a reflections point of view!! Write on dear girl!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a filagree upon my thumb... my thoughts they speak of only one... an echo of eternity? a silver love's fatality and every part of me--- re-done.... simple silver sun, undone... and oh dear god... palm best in me... keep me plan's delivery? a spark of life's totality? silver, simple.. love, undone.... ================== your poetry makes me come undone ... this is so you ... and thats a beautiful thing. love to ya me twin me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
and oh dear god... palm best in me... keep me plan's delivery? a spark of life's totality? silver, simple.. love, undone.... your words just stole my breath. PHEW, loved the poem. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
simply silver sweetly sings serenity's song sighing sofly saying silently shine starlight  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
to me a filigree is a beautiful way of displaying a "jewel" of serenity huggzzz and a Happy New Year to you... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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