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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am trying oh so hard to love you so unselfishly what can I do? what can I say? when will you understand, love's free? Nothing, did I do, I know, a nothing ache, within me grows, nothing's one with evolution nothing--absolute solution.. Everything begs absolution. Zero's eggs of restitution. Tell me--where I find it then? Is there tally of the ZEN? Where is the road that goes back when? what color ink, my constitution.... Tell me, how to stop - I WILL... tell me now to not fulfill... tell me how to go away... say I'll live another day, learn to live another way... and tell me, it's not prostitution. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You deserve better. No one should make you question your values. Good read. Melton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree with Melton of course...this is sad and painful but you've penned it with such poetic virtuality so that others can relate. This is the blues to me and it pours from the heart that hurts. Like John Lee Hooker's song on the album The Healer..."The blues will heal ya." Great write Celeste and may you pen thousands more ...right here where you are so appreciated! ethome |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The last line really hits hard, powerful and beautifully penned poem. Peace.  It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you will live another day. . . and another, and another, and another. . . yea, for all eternity. . . because it is who you are. . . words of life my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very touching poem, and I know that you will live on to bigger and better things in the new year. Sandra |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
deeply touching... *hugs* -Tier |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
again...good people...thanks for the e mails...but it was not my intention to portray myself as a literal prostitute....geez...trust me...I am quite broke...the proof is in the wallet....love to you all...and thank you again. |
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