Open Poetry #11 |
My Hearts Sweet Liberty |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
My Hearts Sweet Liberty In starlight there's a special quality, it cast an ethereal light Which is the reason love comes calling on those starlit nights Especially when the moon is new the stars sparkle is clear to see Love is arrayed in garments that beckon calling come home to me And my foolish heart follows her right into this, her perilous cage Where my captive heart, then her lost freedom bewails in rage Your lovers eyes tell me that I should submit in meek humility And I almost believe that I won't regret my souls sweet liberty For if my soul were here alone the agony would still my heart And my spirit and my soul would be forever ripped open, apart But while you stay within my sight I can just bare this dreadful pain Except I know soon my heart will either die or else she'll go insane For those lies that your eyes promised are now coming on home The battalions of my heart are as insubstantial as the sea foam I've never had any defenses my spirit could never bar her door And now she's stuck in the ocean and it's a long way to shore But how to spring this deadly and treacherous trap to set me free And do I really want to if it means that alone again I will then be If you release me from this I'll always come back to sit in your sun My love and heart will tease yours, they will have such bright fun But held here eternally struggling against these chains that restrain I'll constantly call and beg for freedom, plead to fly high once again For if I hadn't walked blindly into loves cage you'd not now hold me And I would walk beside you in freedom and in love for all eternity Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful thoughts Marsha! They just poured out of your heart. I really enjoyed the final part and the reason for your heart's sweet liberty....... this is a take off of an old cliche ................. "you can't keep your heart and lose it too" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I believe Ethome has said it best...{~,^} |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
P T love, it was love it was. And that line from the the poem, To Althea From Prison 'Know no such liberty' and feeling a little trapped. Take care kid Be good Mushy Kari love, thank you muchly sweety, you are far too kind love Take care Be very good, I know you are Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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