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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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RING Ring Ring A New Year comes with Hope that life and Love will come to us all when we start the year with prayer and thanksgiving Bringing in this New Year now with joy and laughter lets all shout and sing aloud as we all share around the world the time we join together to bring in the New year Let many hearts reach out in love to all mankind who share life upon this planet blessed by God and left unto our keeping Open your mouths with vioces loud proclaim that we will give of our hearts and share love this year as we all move forward starting a fresh new year The bells ring out and call to you to share with us the gift with words that flow from the depths of your heart and soul while you paint magical pictures that fill us with sweet joy ring ring Karen Torbiak© 2001 Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Beautifully formatted and the chimes can be heard clearly. Bravo ! Happy New Year to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Karen, I love this one too!!! You have a penchant for these. . .wonderful. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent! I for one am glad you choose to share your gift among us. A most happy New Year to you! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Wow, Startime, This is really incredible. A beautiful poem, with a strong message in shape of a bell. My God, you really created a very unique and powerful way of writing poems--this is totally yours and others can only learn. Very beautiful, creative and I bet hardwork. Loved it. Lancelot |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Wow, Startime, This is really incredible. A beautiful poem, with a strong message in shape of a bell. My God, you really created a very unique and powerful way of writing poems--this is totally yours and others can only learn. Very beautiful, creative and I bet hardwork. Loved it. Lancelot {Bilal} |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Marge Thank you, dear one. Happy New Year with love and a New Years hug. Sven *sigh* thanks, sweet man. It was fun to try. Much love and a New Years kiss from me to you. Eagleone The Happy New Year is returned, my friend. Much love and another New Years kiss if you can handle it, from me to you. *grin* Bilal Thank you, dear one. It took a while but was such fun to write. Much love and a New Years kiss on the cheek to you, my friend. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
**Wow Startime.... THIS IS A MASTERPIECE IN VERSE AS WELL AS SHAPE....EXCELLENT!!!!! JOYCE mutington/joyce "I can live by myself, but not within myself." http://www.voy.com/7622/ Mutington's Meadow |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Karen, This is a wonderful way to ring in the new year! It's special poems like this, that make writing and reading poetry a joy. Loved it! Deb HAPPY NEW YEAR! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ding-a-ling I heard the ring in which you sing Happy New Year! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a perfect message Karen. You've composed this so beautifully, both in words and presentation ... wonderful! Best wishes for a Happy New Year, /Kit |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Joyce Thank you so much soul sister. Hugs and Happy New Year to you, my frien. BloomingRose Thank you so very much, Deb. I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. Much love and New Years hugs to you from me. Sunshine Your very words always carry sunshine into all who are bless by them. Much love and New Years hugs to you from me Kit Thank you so much, it was such fun to write. Much love and New years hugs to you from me HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!! Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Karen! Very well done, the words and the format! Happy New Year to you too! Denise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ring that bell and ring it well because you never can tell when we will lose the spell of this friendship that's so swell.....thanks for such creativity Karen it's beautiful! |
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