Open Poetry #11 |
Don't let me walk alone..... |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Don't let me walk alone... I need you now more than before oh how I need you in my pain and sorrow why can't you hold me tight in your embrace don't you really see that wet rainy day's grey without perspective ray of darkness pulling me to insanity oh how I miss loving warmth besides me when I walk alone on a path so slippery I know what you want from me as ever to be strong for you but I am a woman with a heart that being hurt so deeply and without comfort from you is like we lives apart don't let it be history that all I need was you don't wait to long cause I'm not strong indeed. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Sweet, sweet friend ~ You will not walk alone - for there are those who hold your hand and hold you in our hearts. Our collective strength will be yours. Love - hugs - and prayers. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I loved this poem. very good writing the feelings of the heart. Love and light, Richard |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Charisma, Eloquent! And may you not have to walk alone...ever. Elise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I have walked alone with others beside me and now I do not even though I walk alone. Bless you...you will never be alone here! (If this is about you, sometimes it's hard to tell!) "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we never walk alone my friend. . . for there is always one that walks with us. . . superb. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
..thank you all for your reply and your warm thoughts and friendship.....and will hope that the new year bring better day's. happy new year to all of you. (((warm hugs))) Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Got to have that sholder to lean on and cry on...it's just life isn't it and what a comfort it can be when one has a love that is behind them all the way....I hope he doesn't wait too long to get back there and support you...take care ethome |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Charisma, I hope that you indeed receive the support you deserve, and that love treats you well. This is haunting in its plea. Take care. Sandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ethome: yeah I hope that too...thank you for your kind reply. Catalinamoon: thank you for your kind words my friend, and well let's hope that everything will work out well... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Charisma' I read the sadness in your writing, and the words that you express how you feel. I wish you the best, stay strong, and may the next day bring you happiness. BC |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you Bill for your kind words... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, You have my warm embrace to prove that I will not let you walk alone. Cheers and big HUGS from me. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Daniel: thank you for that warm embrace and the cheering up....you are a wonderful sweet friend... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Walk alone? with a Balladeer around? NO WAY!! Take my hand, Charisma.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know this feeling...even with friends all around you it is a special one that will fill your heart with joy and you will lose your loneliness in that one person and feel complete...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Balladeer: thank you for reaching your hand out....you are a good friend, love you for that *s* james: yes you know it....and its an lonely feeling.....thank you for passing by. |
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