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Fear Holds Thee
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Fear Holds Thee |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Last night I dreamt eyes open wide of salty shores and falling skies, collecting the pieces and placing them in my pocket In big boats of lavender you sail the damp streets, calling out my name But my tongue was traded for another mouthful of pride Choking on my tears I watch you go by, hoping that someday I'll find my feet Angel 9.1.00 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it holds us back doesn't it DE? excellent. . . the feeling of helplessness. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sometimes it is the hardest thing in the world to just spit out the simplest of words. Wonderful read...I enjoyed it much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you write so many emotions and so many images in so few well chosen words... very cool writing .. your poetry always has impact ... and thats way cool too later jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkEnchantress~ This is just a hauntingly lovely piece of writing. 'In big boats of lavender you sail the damp streets, calling out my name But my tongue was traded for another mouthful of pride' Quite creatively stated. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautiful, yet sad. Pride is good except when we let it run our love life. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful expression of this feeling. Happiness in the new year Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Many excellent thoughts in this one, my favorite word is "lavender" love that I have it in my garden and it spreads just like love (should) thank you for this one. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
DE, great piece you have penned  especially loved these lines.... But my tongue was traded for another mouthful of pride yes sometimes it can get in the way, can't it? Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
But my tongue was traded for another mouthful of pride Wonderful words you have penned here..full of emotions..Pride is all we're left with sometimes, something we should never sacrifice..Thanks for the great read... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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