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A Cup Of Warmth To Share
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A Cup Of Warmth To Share |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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Come share a cup of warmth with me; Let’s sup upon a memory; Of long ago, of distant day; Turn melancholy thought away; Rejuvenate the joy inside; Mine treasure by an oceanside; Swim deep beneath the crashing waves; Forsake the anchor that enslaves The heart; skim stones across a lake; Find wonder in each dancing flake That gently pirouettes to earth; Rekindle long lost youthful mirth; Sip nectar from the tender vine Drink deep the honeysuckle’s wine; Let’s reach again for stars on high Believing we can touch the sky Become as children once again Create new memories and then, Enchanted, dance within this place Forever, through all time and space; Come, let’s create a memory; Come, share this cup of warmth with me. Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
such a lovely poem Denise..loved it...HAPPY NEW YEAR to you ..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Oh, you sweet poet ! Delicious is the warmth of you - topped off with a marshmallow or two ??? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Denise--What a lovely, heart-filling poem...thank you for its warmth. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i love the image of the snowflake doing pirouettes.... of course i'm a little flakey myself sometimes and like to dance in the snow so... that's why that one probably hit me... lol... but, denise... this whole poem is really really beautiful!! to be as children again... yes, my friend!... do it!!! there's nothing like freeing up our hearts from the daily stresses and becoming open to new experiences... especially shared ones.. wonderful writing!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a lovely way to toast in the new year...you never fail to amaze me with your words... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
anytime my friend. . . should I bring the biscotti?? wonderful!  -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh I love to share a cup of warmth....wonderful thoughts....and imagery. love it....love the warmth....love you for this wonderful piece. happy new year ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Denise ... this was tremendous! I can't describe how you touched me with this today ... but please know that you did in a very positive and inspirational way ... Thank you Denise. Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Is that an open invitation. Beautiful poem, I usually drink my cups of warmth alone but I bet it tastes better in the company of friends. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely poem, and such good thoughts to carry into the new year. Happy days and nights to you. Sandra |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes! An invitation! Let's dance around in the snow at midnight, our cup of warmth topped off with a marshmallow or two, biscotti for dipping, and welcome in the New Year together!! Sounds good to me, my friends!! Denise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And what a beautiful open and lighthearted cup of warmth it is.....so many wonderful reflections on the little things that mean so much....I thoroughly enjoyed this read...take care ethome |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh, I'd love to! Nothing like a nice cup of warmth to start the morning! One filled with such love and cheer! This was a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you, and have the happiest new year! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, gentlemen! I'm glad you enjoyed! Denise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I would love to especially if it is with a Thomas Kinkaid in the background hanging on the wall. HAVE A GREAT NEW YEAR. I look forward to sharing much more poetry reads with you. |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Beautifully penned, I love this line Forsake the anchor that enslaves If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Warm wishes to you Denise enjoyed the words and thought My "Cups Of Kindness" poem is on the "Holiday Cheer forum Hope |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you for reading and for your lovely replies, Mark, John and Hope. Mark, he's on my wall for good, 'cause I ain't lettin' him leave! John, I'm glad you liked it! Hope, I will check it out! Thanks again for your lovely comments! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Just beautiful! A wonderful poem to welcome in the New Year! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks, Elizabeth! Glad you enjoyed it! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely..and I believe I could use a cup of coffee and a cup of warmth right now...James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks, James! Coming right up! I'm glad you enjoyed it!Denise |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely, would share a cup with you anytime. jwesley |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Denise, I love the warmth, the "cup of", the whole feel of the comfort and all for the New Year. Love and hugs, Mother |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, jwesley and Mother for reading and for your lovely replies! Denise |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
mmm.. this cup of warmth is yummy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Now how in thunder did I miss seeing this one? *S* Maybe I was just saving your cup of warmth for a cold, dreary morning so it would brighten my day... this is beautiful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
denise, I suppose I've gotten here too late for all the replies, but I wanted to say I read you and I enjoy you...and this one touched me |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This is the poem that keeps on giving! *smiles* I'm glad it came up again so that I could read it... excellent writing and message... -Tier{Robin} |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Denise, This is trully beautiful friend, and sounds like a wonderful time we would have creating memories together, I wish we all lived close to each other, we should get Poet deVine back on that idea of buying a town whatch you think "hehe" wonderful poetry here very much LOVED. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*Pulls up a chair*...pour me a cup my friend, it's time we sat and talked a spell. Lovely poem Denise What lies behind us and lies before us are small matters compaired to what lies within us. [url] [URL=http://www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
EagleScorpian - I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Want seconds?! hehehe  Suthern - I'm always glad to brighten your day! Thanks so much! Dixie - It's never too late and you've made my day! Tiersden - Just like the Energizer Bunny - LOL Thanks so much! Cerenity - Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! That would be wonderful if we could all get together, wouldn't it?! That town would be absolutely DeVine! Ruth - Set a spell, take your shoes off...hehehe Thanks so much, Ruth...I sure have missed you around here! Denise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This poem flowed and I mean flowed. The meter is excellent and the thoughts as well. I enjoyed this very, very much, Denise. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Why thank you, Kathleen! I'm glad you found it to your liking! Would you care for another cup?! Denise |
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Quiet One Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 46Shhhhh |
Sounds so enticing very lovely |
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Mario Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 21Ireland |
What effect warmth has on people Denise !! like the way you make the cup - its your swirling together of beautiful lines that invokes hearts to draw near, and listen. When friends meet, hearts warm. A beautiful poem. Hope the New Year party was fun! Mario. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Quiet One and Mario! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Denise, I love the thought in this. The rhythm, rhyme, sentiment and flow is perfect. This uplifted me this morning, I'll share a cup with you anyday, my friend Melissa~ |
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