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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-12-08 03:23 PM


A Dragons Promise

My dragon privileged me last night
With a fantasy out of sight.
He hinted a phantom control
Would give me goal and save my soul.

I listened with passionate will
This bill of lading laid to quill.
And he whispered things in my ear
Everything I wanted to hear.

Winked and blinked fascinating wile
Hot erotic ecstatic guile
Vow's that brought my kettle to boil
With purest pure of olive oil.

His breath went hot to coolest cool
And in truth I started to drool.
And I could not, myself to say
Nay, you lie it is just your way.

I turned from right to left in sleep
And from my eye a tear did seep.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-08 04:09 PM


Ah Sy....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-12-08 08:03 PM


NO one else could drool so damn cool  
CHERRY KOOL-AID Drool me thinks ...*winkiewinkie*
I brought a couple of me girlies from the mystic by ..
to keep that randy dragon busy so you can get some sleep ... or NOT   hehe
later-lets make-chaos-gator
me





Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2000-12-08 09:41 PM


Sunshine,
Ah Krilea, *L*

JM,
Whom else but you could be so thoughtful.
Winkiewinkie Sy

BSC
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4 posted 2000-12-08 09:45 PM


Ooooh so wonderful Seymour, what images!  Bonnie
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-12-09 09:45 AM


Bonnie,
Thak you for the Ooooh.

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-12-09 09:59 AM


Oh, I really liked this Seymour!  Such a wonderful rhythmic flow and great visuals brought to mind ... much enjoyed this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Denise
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7 posted 2000-12-09 11:37 AM


Very good, Seymour! I enjoyed reading this! Nice to see your pic up there too!

Denise

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8 posted 2000-12-09 11:42 AM


Seymour~
For all your Puff n' Stuff -
this is a brilliant write ...

'I listened with passionate will
This bill of lading laid to quill.'


A most gratifying thought.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2000-12-09 03:00 PM


Kit,
Glad you enjoyed since you are one of my favorites.

Denise,
Thank you sweet lady.

Marge,
Always enjoy your poetic comments. *L* Sy

dgvarner
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10 posted 2001-01-20 01:25 AM


very cool...
you and our little_spyro_t_dragon should get together and compare notes   ..between you and his dragon diaries, i think we got some COOOL dragons in our blue pages!  

hugs, g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

Honeybee
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11 posted 2001-08-02 12:08 PM



Sir Sy, only you could bring that Randy dragon of yours to life with poetic verse  
An awesome write!

Melissa~

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